Absolutely beautiful. I loved every word of it.
Beautifully written and an amazing one-shot plot.
You did a phenomenal job =]

A very cute story. And I'm glad baby Rachel here doesn't annoy me like her adult counterpart in the comics.

Seems to me that Jean is the one gets the whole deal in the end.:)

Do you mind if I recommend your story to the website ''X-Men Hero: Cyclops''? We're trying to enlarge the collection of Cyclops-related fanfics. Your story will help us to maintain the site and keep it going.

Thanks for sharing this story with us.

Thanks for sharing this, it was such a charming story with just the right mix of humor and sweetness.

So... I've followed your stories for YEARS.

...this particular piece just proves why!! :-)

I got all misty eyed at the end, I have to admit! LOL It was beautiful!! Loved it!

This was utterly adorable! Loved it - keep up the great work. :)

That's hilarious. What a charming story, the whole way through. Kudos! Thx for sharing.