duty before rest

This story has a lot of potential. Very cute. :) There are a few grammatical errors, I would recommend you have a beta read the chapters before you post them, but the story is excellent, and your characterization is spot-on. Update soon!

Poor Michael, being sick and missing out on the strangeness of the Banks household. It took you a while to update this, though... oh well good start! =D

This is awesome! There are a few grammatical errors but really not too many. And I don't think it's out of character at all, at least not from what I read. Please update soon.

this story has intrigued me. i hope you right more soon. i'm interested to see where you take this story.