this is a very good story. i think you got the personalities perfect and pretty much everything else was great as well

hey...
I like your fanfic~
I want more
You're great to make this story
It so exciting
I want your fanfic about Aile and Vent
Maybe I can help you make your fanfic

Simply Amazing.

Best fanfic I ever seen.

Merry Christmas Cy! Sorry for the late review, but I didn't have any time last night.

Aww...this was so emotional and heart-warming. I absolutely loved this story! The confession was espically heart-warming for me and definitely top-notch. Congrats on creating a great Christmas story!

Have a good end to '08! I know I will!

Your bro-in-arms,
DB

pretty good, but could you put some more stuff into it?

oh!, waht a beautiful history!!..I love it...:D

I love vent and aile together and are very romantic,...the truth I'm not good to write at anything romantic .. all the stories in English that I upload are of my friends and brothers !!... jaja!!..

please write more!!..