 luvgoodstuuf 2009-10-05 . chapter 4SO FREAKING AWESOME!
THIS
IS
GORGEOUS!
ME
LOVES
IT! :D |
 Moonlit Water Sunny River 2009-07-12 . chapter 4O coolio! but wow never seen that in a fanfic before...oh shit, you're gonna write a lemon? O.o that should be...interesting... |
 kittyebony13 2009-05-25 . chapter 4Wow! O.o That was really good! I'm glad I'm not the only one to have an idea about Envy as a hermaphrodite...
Anyways, really great job so far! I can't wait for more! (looks for subscribe button and presses) That tells me when you update, right? I hope so... cuz I have no clue what I'm doing...
I can't wait for the next installment! Awesome story! |
 The Only Love For Soujiro Seta 2009-03-17 . chapter 4loving the story, so please keep writing!! |
 EvaTheNymphe 2009-02-27 . chapter 4will be there a nex chapter? |
 Slimm- 2009-01-30 . chapter 4I love this, like really.
I officially worship you.
Update. |
 PurpleCranberi 2009-01-18 . chapter 4I never understand how Ed doesn't like Milk. To me that's like saying you don't like water. I mean Milk doesn't really have a taste..well it does...but it doesn't. Does that make sense?
Nice place to end Lol.
I really like this story. Envy is too cute!!
Update soon ^.^ |
 PurpleCranberi 2009-01-18 . chapter 3I don't know his secret yet. I'll figure it out soon, or you'll reveal it soon...
Ed put Envy's bleeding thumb in his mouth o_O |
 PurpleCranberi 2009-01-18 . chapter 2You shouldn't crawl into a dark cave and choke on your own blood!!
Envy is so cute in your story! I love him like this, he just seems so innocent!! To be truthfull I didn't know abash was a word. I learned something new! |
 PurpleCranberi 2009-01-18 . chapter 1Al T_T
That's really sweet of Ed! Reminds me of Al t_t I laughed so much with the line ENVY said to Ed about transforming into a pedo. Nice touch! (though Envy wouldn't be a pedo). |
 Yaoi-fangirl-Dark-side 2009-01-15 . chapter 4-freaks-
! D..! I..! BAD TOWEL! You can't just drop down in front of Edward! In front of poor innocent Edward!!
-rushes over to cover Ed's eyes- DON'T WORRY EDWARD!! I'll save your virgin eyes!! -hits invisible "don't-enter-unless-you're-the-author-wall"- Ow... I forgot... Do not ruin the story by interfere :P
I like the idea of Envy having a unormal body. Edward better not think of him as a freak!
Update soon! :D |
 Yaoi-fangirl-Dark-side 2009-01-15 . chapter 3!! I haven't reviewed! Bad me!
Ed... Is it normal to just... Stuck other peoples finger in your mouth?? Somebody, give the boy a lollipop!
Oh no, pervert thoughts xD Bad me.
And Edward is still so nice and Envy is clueless. Love it! |
 YukinoMaikeru 2009-01-15 . chapter 4ZOMG!!
XD make it a lemon XD!!
lemon! lemon! lemon! |
 Envy-pride'ed 2009-01-15 . chapter 1More or less when will you update a new chapter? I hope it's soon, 'cause I love the story :D |
 YukinoMaikeru 2009-01-14 . chapter 2action packed chapter XD!!
Briliant thinking.
Pocky, reminds me I finished a bocks of strawberry in less then 5 mins XD!! |