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Rac80
2009-05-05 . chapter 1
Nice. I really enjoyed that story a lot. I can see Daniel buying her stuff almost against his will. men are so like that. I also loved the cam/carolyn and sam/jack bits. :D
starjems88
2009-01-18 . chapter 1
cute:)
CindyLou13
2009-01-17 . chapter 1
Cute story! Daniel is just so shy!

Thanks so much for writing!
CindyLou
Ellebel
2009-01-11 . chapter 1
more please :)
Nemea
2008-12-28 . chapter 1
THE most amazing end! Loved it!
Oldlibrn
2008-12-26 . chapter 1
Excellent & fun! Wouldn't mind a moning after wrap up. Glad to see that Sam hadn't forgotten her Liked the idea of Walters gateroom celebration and that they didn't forget her.

I really can't imagine how this story could possibly work with Janet.

Nice Xmas gift to your readers.
Mrs. Pollifax
2008-12-26 . chapter 1
Hee. I love Daniel getting all caught up in the Christmas shopping and going completely overboard, and then not knowing what to do with himself once what he's bought catches up with him. Plus, that little moment where he finds the gift he'd have loved and *buys something else instead* is just priceless.
Julie
2008-12-26 . chapter 1
DanielJanet would be much better than this because Vala ruined the show!
Anne Rose
2008-12-25 . chapter 1
LOL! In for a penny, in for a pound. Silly Daniel. ;-)

Merry Christmas!
jodiesto
2008-12-25 . chapter 1
Fun, Fun, Fun, just the right amount of fluff. Merry Christmas.
Eilidh17
2008-12-24 . chapter 1
Sweet B! Hope you have a wonderful Christmas. - Cheryl
acer-sigma
2008-12-24 . chapter 1
Another nice little Christmas story! Looks like Daniel got caught up in the Christmas fever during his little outing. Rather curious as to what he bought from Victoria Secrets that he was somewhat hesitant to give Vala. At least Sam gave him a nice little nudge. And I can imagine the grins when everyone else find out why Daniel and Vala are missing.

And nice bit with the ending there. Can just picture Vala trying to determine which of the gifts on her bed she should unwrap first, the box or Daniel. ;)

Merry Christmas!
CaramelMonkey
2008-12-24 . chapter 1
Aww~... cute!(:

Merry Christmas!^^
Devilish Me
2008-12-24 . chapter 1
Thee-hee Sretan Bozic hon. Ahm..uhm.. sweet! And a confused Daniel is always the best choice! :P
J.Stone
2008-12-24 . chapter 1
What? We don't get to read about the sexy gift?? :-( Oh well. Thanks
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