I like this. It's a brilliant idea.

you put john in there I was wondering if he was going to come back loved it please update soon

I was going to say the Doctor and Rose were acting crazy, then I realised I would be stating the obvious xD!

Great chapter!

I loved it.

yay thanks for the update )

Interesting

This chapter was the absolute best, I think. Great job and I cannot wait to see what you do with EoT. I'm also so happy that the tension between Rose and the Doctor has finally ended and they've confessed their love for each other. It's about time! Brilliant chapter!

Keep on writing!

did the Doctor leave Donna on Mars? I'm really looking forward to your next chapter please update soon

ZOMG, this made me wish Rose and Donna were there in Waters of Mars

just read chapter 8, great story, can't wait to read the end of time with rose and donna, and of course the death and regeneration of the doctor into the eleventh doctor, hope you update soon

are you gong to update?

Liked how Rose and Donna were involved:

1. Rose treating Luke like her nephew.

2. Donna suggesting the jug.

3. Rose's relationship with the kids.

4. How the Trickster knew Rose as the one who revived some friends and defeated a Dalek-fleet.

5. Donna comparing the gang to Scooby Doo.

6. Donna's concern for Clyde.

7. How the Doctor babysat the kids.

8. How Rose, Donna and Sarah quoted the catchphrase of the Three Musketeers.

Here are some good ideas for Waters of Mars:

1. Rose will also know of Ice-Warriors, having helped some.

2. Rose will whistle the theme 'Inspector Gadget' when upgrading Gadget.

3. Rose will mutter a version of Shakespeare's to be or not to be when pondering whether to save the people or not.

4. Rose will greet Segma when she sees him.

Aww. Nice chapter ending

Pretty good, I suppose. Not as good as your other stuff, though, and pretty short. Not as original. Also, it's Rani, not Riley.

I cbb to sign in atm.

This is all fantastic, except one thing - she's called Rani not Riley :)!