Nice although a little sad!

T_T
That was sad!
T_T

But a beautiful fic. Poor Ryoma.
Love it :]

Write more! n_n

I was thinking that it was Sakuno speaking to herself all through out the story. Then...I found out that it was Ryoma XD Maybe the first part was just a bit confusing. Or maybe I was too dumb to understand anything at all. Some sentences didn't flow smoothly. And using first person perspective had its own setbacks like having inconsistency with your verbs. Like having inconsistency all through out. I hope you would be more careful with them. Ryoma was definitely out of character but since you gave a warning it was pretty much pardonable. What else?

Well you did quite a good job.

that was... sad.

you edited it right? but the edited version is more impressive, i must say. it is good.

but hey, you didn't clarified why Sakuno died. it's because of a sickness, right? i was waiting to know what sickness it was, but you didn't tell what it is.

anyway, nice fic ya-chan! ^_^

sniff sniff, I have a question. sniff. How did Ryuzaki die? sniff. Is it a sickness? sniff. It's nice to know that you're still writing stories even though you haven't updated for 5 months. sniff. Wow, that's long. sniff. I could only last until 2 months. sniff. Sorry to bother you. sniff. Also for the sniffing because the story is so sad and I have a cold. sniff. Ja ne! sniff...

Howell, this is it. my review.

wow. kakanosebleed naman itong one shot fic mo. pero good work, maganda xa. Yung POV ni ryoma hindi nagmumukhang selfish kasi it gives way to other feelings as well.

magaling ang pagkakanarrate. hindi rin redundant. hindi rin namimisplace ang mga adjectives. hahaha.

all in all... *thumbs up*

rucHicHan

keep up the good work!

aw... so sad!
wah... but a nice fic!
thanks! and merry christmas!
update soon!

~freaky-chan

You edited some stuffs, am I right? Haha. This was one of my votes! :D


P.S. PUTIK NA ABS-CBN. Grr.

Update ka na sa DOTR, mmkay?

iam freakin' crying right now!
that was so sad!

merry xmas!!
and happy bday ryoma!!

Aw, poor Ryoma. Lovely job in the little Prince's POV

OMY! That was sad! You DID edit it! It turned out much more dramatic! It made my heart squeeze! So sad! I was about to cry! and out of all the days it was Ryoma's birthday!

But of course it was great! One of the GREATEST drama fics I've ever read :3 I hope for you to make more! :D