 nictuniema 12/24/05 . chapter 1Too sad, but still good. |
 Hiron Otsuki 5/1/05 . chapter 1Been having a full-out make-myself-cry fest over your fics. They're so beautiful... |
 Queen of Blades 4/17/03 . chapter 1all together now: "aw"
a really sweet story. I liked it a lot. Keep writing! |
 Shaz 3/23/03 . chapter 1 Sad:( |
 no name 3/19/03 . chapter 1 WAH! GOOD! WAH! |
 Larien Starr 4/1/02 . chapter 1Excellent! Reads almost like the real thing, everyone esp. Tobias is very in character. Sweet and sad, very sad. I love the ending! |
 xxsincerityxx 12/17/01 . chapter 1...i read animorphs when i was like 11-13...then i stopped, because i thought i was too cool or something. now i'm reading them again, but i'm rereading the ones i have...i haven't gotten past 20. well, i guess rachel dies, then. *lol* well, whatever. i guess it's not the end that counts, it's the journey there. or something.
anyway, this was a VERY good fic. i cried. i admit it. i cried. a lot. it was sad. combined with the sad music i'm listening to...not a good combination. but i loved it. write some more, something else. something else sad and angsty. :D |
 Rachel1289 12/11/01 . chapter 1OMG! I'm crying! I never cry. This is one of the best ones I've ever read. I think you should write one about Jake & Cassie. |
 angelofcloud9 who isn't logged in right now 11/29/01 . chapter 1 Wow. This made me cry. The only thing I didn't quite understand was this: what was it time for? Time for Tobias to let the ashes go? |
 ShimmeringSand 11/28/01 . chapter 1 ::sniffles and tear drops:: sweet, very sad, and very sweet |
 Meeeeeeeeeee 11/28/01 . chapter 1 Hiiii, This was really cool and well written. Pity it was sooo sad :(. Trouble is the Rachel Comebacks are beginning to to becomme a clique so I guess u didn't want to write one of those.
Ne way for the writers block you should try writing a Marco kidnapp story, It'll help u get ure sense of humur, Violence, Others feelings annnd stuff like that. Great for getting you back into writing. Just a suggestion I'll reveiw it if ya do :) |
 Th' Lady Shadow 11/27/01 . chapter 1Awwwwww! ;_; *sniffles* How very very sweet...
Rachel was my favorite character. And the Rachel/Tobias relationship was one of my favorite things about Animorphs - I wanted to bop Applegate over the head for making Rachel die.
Why couldn't it have been Marco?
Oh well.
I really liked it _ Lovely ending, too o_o I think I liked that most of all. Keep writing! |