This. Story. Is the best thing evar. God, now crying. So beautiful, how you developed their relationship-GAH! My fav chapter so far. I can't find words to describe it. I love this too much!

It's longer cause Grimmjow talks wayyy much more than Ulquiorra ;D

and i think it's actually pretty good cause i like it xD...but then honestly what do i know of writing x)

PLEASE TELL ME DO THEY DIE OR NOT?

This is the best POV story ever to exist, in my oppinion :) The way you describe everything so perfectly is just plain touching :)

I still love this... after like... the 10th (small exageration... probably been 5 times or so) time I've read this. akfldkfasd;kl *heart* so brilliant. xD

nu! wait was that it? WAS THAT THE END? PLEASE let there be more i am BEGGING you! I will DIE if there is not more! x_X

Another brilliant work! :) Your writing never ceases to amaze me :)

Yeah... I commented before (as "Liv")... but I needed to add this to my favorites :)

I just have to say that you seem to know exactly what to say to draw the reader in and how to make a story so incredibly close to perfection. Thank you for sharing! :)

In continuation to Possession, you gave us an equal look at the Espadas' relationship. I find Grimmjow's emotional turmoil more heartfelt as he is the one who can find more space to express his feelings. The struggle of their relationship when Aizen found out made this all the more interesting. Now I'm also curious as to what Aizen plans to tell them. What Aizen's plan in the first place was because I fail to see that he was not able to foresee this in some way; perhaps he did not entirely expect Grimmjow and Ulquiorra to be the ones having the relationship since they are considered rivals after all.

Am I the only one praying and begging you to write a sequel or perhaps an epilogue? I could not help but sympathize with Grimmjow's plight. He had experienced nightmares where his relationship with Ulquiorra was broken. I just want to have a peek at Aizen's ultimate plan for them after all that they've been through.

Would that be even possible?

D'aww :) That is so cute :D I really love the ending, even though it's unknown of what Aizen will say...

I just...don't have any words for this, I really love this story!

geezus. seriously. how do u write like that.

*reduced to a puddle* :S

*melts*

i went through this slowly and reread many lines.. i didn't want it to finish...

... im so in love with this...

Well I certainly take my time to review. Believe it or not i actually had followed Possession as it was written but as it ended i found i lost the time i had to my fanfiction fetish so here i am now, just finishing Affliction, and it is finally time to give you the long overdue credit you deserve on this fic.

Absolutely incredible. I really would go on to say everything about it that i believe was amazingly done, i promise you, but honestly it would take at least twice the amount of words used to create that beautiful piece of writing. I do believe that every word was perfect; every description, every thought, every whistper, every emotion that could possibly be conveyed through the written word was done so impecibly and tastefully and i would need every word of your story and more to explain why.

Congradulations on a fantastic piece of work. As a writer myself i do know how difficult it can be to take praise and how much more reasonable constructive criticism sounds but please believe that i simply have none to give. I am thoroughly impressed and pleased with this story and it will remain a favourite not to be overlooked. Unforgettibly well done. Never stop.

There is something wrong with this story. You have dragged me along on an emotional roller coaster that I absolutely adore and there is no fifth chapter :(.

I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! TT_TT

omg this is so cool..ulpload quickly please!