ok. I'll make this quick!

a great oneshot. a few spelling errors but barely noticeabale!

I suddenly feel like a total butt wipe since...well I didn't see this when it was posted... nearly 6 months ago *eyetwitch*

I through myself at your mercy as I add this piece of non canon goodness to my favorites. Wonderful job!

Good Job, AsianFlipGurl! This story, even though it's only a one-shot, is one of your best work. No wonder you weren't paying attention in class. You were too busy writing up this masterpiece! Keep 'em coming!

Ooh, I never knew this pairing could be so...hot. Especially near the end! Haha, HIS SISTER. Oh Mary. XD This was great!

ASK

Aw!

Absolutely gorgeous. THIS is why I love Kairy so :D death to canon pairings!

Mage is very lucky, and I'm extremely glad that he had a vague wishlist, because this is what resulted. Heh.

Merry Christmas!

- Hannah

Wow. It needs a little bit of cleanup still, but even clossing over the occaisional typo this was very nice. Thank you very much!