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| Reviews for Return of the Best |
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  Guest 5/6/13 . chapter 14 Type your review for this chapter here... |
| Guest 4/1/13 . chapter 21 Just one thing, I have read all the way up to chapter 21, and I must say that this is clearly the MOST SPECTACULAR FANFICTION I EVER READ! I has a mixture of every genre! The romance in Advanceshipping which I think is the best, comedy inputed here and there in your chapters which made me laugh so much that I couldn't breathe! It has suspense and mystery to what Drew and the mysterious dark man have planned to do to Ash! Add to the fact that the battles are really thought out and written! I have never read such descriptive imagery of a Pokemon Battle in forms of words! Every time I read through the parts, I imagine the whole battle occurring in my head and adding the dialogue between the characters! This fanfiction is my #1 FAVORITE! I hope you finish this story because you left it off on such a good cliffhanger, I wish I could just imagine Ash and the rest of the guys go through shopping with the girls and even better, I REALLY HOPE you do the chapter that has the Championship Ball in it, I would love to see what happens and the plot Drew and the man has for Ash unfold! I can say that many other people who read this story agree with me, so I ask, PLEASE UPDATE WITH NEW CHAPTERS! You're extremely talented in writing ! |
 uranmaster 2/15/13 . chapter 21AWESOME STORY DUDE! TOTALLY OUT OF THE HOOK AND I MEAN IT LITERALLY BECAUSE IT WAS BEYOND IMAGINATION, ALTHOUGH THAT I HAVE BEEN WAITING SINCE AUTUMN I STILL THINK YOU ARE THE MOST TALENTED FANFICTION AUTHOR THAT HAS A STORY ABOUT ADVANCESHIPPING! ADVANCESHIPPING FOREVER DUDE! |
| Demon Blade 1/23/13 . chapter 1 the problem ain't u dude. the problem is within me.2 say the truth i hate 3 caracters in pokemon and they r paul,drew& 't know y but i just hate thier 4 not reading the story man. |
| Guest 12/13/12 . chapter 8 It is okay |
| Guest 12/12/12 . chapter 6 Dick bitch this was horibal make ash and may kiss already |
| dh-hp 11/26/12 . chapter 21 just wanted to say this has to be one of the best fanfics iv ever read, i love the idea of ash going away and then coming back even stringer |
| Guest 11/25/12 . chapter 14 What the fuck! Drew was never that psychotic |
| Iluvpokemon1109 11/11/12 . chapter 1 This story is the best! |
| Galaxy Dragonoid 11/4/12 . chapter 3 Nice can't wait for more |
| Guest 11/3/12 . chapter 21 Y NO NEW CHAPTER |
| sid.praveen22 10/7/12 . chapter 21 zxcz |
| Pokemon Fan 9/3/12 . chapter 6 I'm enjoying this story but I noticed you have mentioned 26 Tauros. Ash has 30 Tauros not 26. |
| foggraven 8/13/12 . chapter 4 looks like max's got a fangirl haha |
| foggraven 8/13/12 . chapter 3 Nice to see some venusaur love x3 |
