 SunRise19 2009-10-29 . chapter 11To answer your question right off the bat: I think they do have a new season, they just aren't showing it yet..personally, in my own opinion;I saddly think that they will never show the new episodes. I read somewhere that they do have another 13 episodes but they aren't releasing them..*sighs* such a shame really..
Now, onto my review of the chapter...it's hard to think of Jane as being only ten years old in this chapter..she's acting so grown up. of course, it was common for back then.to mature quickly.
I do wonder what will happen next? Will someone or anyone come to her aid? This is a great story, I can't wait for an update whenever you can! |
 Lavenderpaw 2009-10-23 . chapter 11Wow, looks like we're going to have us a fight. Glad you updated. |
 Petrea Izefia Matkeoo 2009-10-12 . chapter 11I heard something about having to wait until after the New Year or something like that. But according to one of my friends there is no season. But- there is something about a new season on Wikipedia the last time I checked. So maybe.
Good chapter- I loved the bit at the beginning. Especaially, "there were no friends here." and "And the worst part of it was…no one cared…" Truly creepy.
Love it! |
 Lavenderpaw 2009-07-13 . chapter 10Wow, well. At least Dragon is walking. Good chapter. Will Jane get to him in time? *gasp*
LP |
 SunRise19 2009-07-08 . chapter 10Aww, please don't stop it there! That's evil!
Ok, love the chapter! Poor dragon though! I feel bad for him..great work here I can't wait for more! |
 Petrea Izefia Matkeoo 2009-07-08 . chapter 10Geeze- yet another good chapter followed by another cliffhanger! Arrgh- this is really getting tot he climax point isn't it? Nicely done with the chapter separations. This is very nicely written. Don't worry about updating- as long as you continue this story while I'm still alive- I'm okay! I hope your roller-coaster gets better! |
 Petrea Izefia Matkeoo 2009-06-20 . chapter 9Ooh I thought that chapter was good. I think the 'slapped' feeling of it actually help this chapter. It seemed like the urgentness of what Jane is planning was heightened by the whole thing. |
 Lavenderpaw 2009-06-17 . chapter 9You know, I just realized something. It's always harder to see a larger creature suffering then anything. Poor Dragon. Hopefully Jane can get her mentor's help. Glad you could finally update. :)
LP |
 SunRise19 2009-06-13 . chapter 9This was a great chapter! I was wondering about this story...I love it! I hope the tables are finally turning in Jane and Dragon's favor! Awesome job! |
 HappyRaven172 2009-04-15 . chapter 1I also wish to say this is very well done and please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
 anonymous 2009-03-19 . chapter 8 Cool, neat way to put it. Keep this up! :) |
 KrisEleven 2009-03-19 . chapter 1This was well written- you have a good use of dialogue and description. I really loved "the whispering still bothered him like a haunt". That was a beautiful line.
I don't think you really grasped Dragon's character in parts of this fic. He has a remarkable disdain for humans except Jane and in canon probably wouldn't nitice if they ignored him and would be amused that they were frightened. You did capture him well in his relations to Jane, though.
Canon-wise, this show has the unique quirk of never using abbreviations in the dialogue. It seems a little odd to read the characters use words like don't and can't because of that, but that has to do with your choice so I just thought I'd mention it as a side-note.
The plot of this fic was interesting. I do like the idea you have of him having a hard time fitting in with the castle and having only Jane around. However, there's only two knights and another squire in the castle and one of those makes every attempt to be polite to Dragon becasue of a bit of his past that we learn of in an episode (Last of the Dragonslayers), so that seemed odd. Also, the main action of your story is exactly what happens in a different episode (Adventures in Royal Babysitting), which also makes it slightly weird. I feel like you could have been more creative by coming up with a new way to deal with the exact same issue of Dragon saving Lavinia, because you're right that her getting lost is a reoccuring theme in the series.
KrisEleven~ |
 Lavenderpaw 2009-03-11 . chapter 7Poor drag-drag. I hope he makes it okay. Dragon barf... ugh.
Update when you can. |
 Petrea Izefia Matkeoo 2009-03-08 . chapter 7Good chapter. I really liked it. Short true- but the confusion really adds to what Dragon is going through. Nicely done. I hope Dragon will be alright! |
 anonymous 2009-03-07 . chapter 7 Please update!! I'm loving this story and can't wait to find out what happens next!! :) |