I liek this story. =D!

awesome story! really got me into feeling that creed and train had a deep bond. Really.

nice. i especially like the title's translation.
now for -my- speech
that was a truly wonderful story, and went well outside the bounds and cliches of other fanfictions. i guess, in retrospect, it really did have the perfect amount of everything, including what i mentioned earlier. in all, this is a magnificent piece of writing, and i think i shall get off fanfiction for at -least- the next few days, so that the comparisons will not be quite so harsh.
;P
i hope to read more!

well, the writing is flawless, and captures the characters' personalities very well, but i think you need to consider your audience. as much as this particular fanfic is worth it, this isn't a novel, it's a story posted on a site of mostly-insane fangirls. and when fangirls chose this rating, they expect...certain things, which this fic isn't really providing in the proper...-detail-. if you get my drift.
not me specifically, mind you, but twenty-seven chapters of an engrossing and m-rated story is a rather long time to go without certain...entertainment...
^^

whoa, whoa, whoa. wait a minute..."alpha tom"? train can't be -seme-! i'll have to read the whole rest of this story to find out...and you know, 42 chapters is really a bit extravagant...whatever. just these few have been absolutley great! (you have no idea how happy it makes me to find a story without typos every three sentences)

wow...you sure capture creed's...creepyness.
wonderful writing!

I just read all 41 chapters, including the end note, in one sitting. That was absolutely amazing; I managed to read Creed without hating him, which is impressive.
This is definitely one of my favorite stories. Your words weren't always descriptive, but it was always beautifully poetic in a sense .. I really, really enjoyed it. Fantastic job.

That was an truly amazing story one of the best I have ever read Kudos to u !

This fic is just too awesome to be described in words <3
I just love Train and Creed. You did a great job with their character! <3

I read the whole entire story, and I loved it. I hope to see more of your stories in the future!

~SilverWolfFire

will you be posting the story? ;3

That was a great end to this chapter. Nice story,good job. You are an excellent writer and I enjoyed reading this story.

love how you put glimpses of the future in the past. though now i'm sad for creed.

It's very cute and sweet. ^-^

Aww, that actually made me miss my boyfriend. Anyway, great chapter, loved it. You are an excellent writer and I thoroughly enjoyed this. Thank you for writing it ^.^