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| Reviews for Rising Sun: The Carlisle Cullen Story |
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   Emiliana Keladry 12/27/08 . chapter 7I don't know if I could stand a burning in the back of my throat forever. Edward is strong and wonderful. Esme next? :) Update soon! You are doing a wonderful job! Emma |
| Emiliana Keladry 12/27/08 . chapter 6 Edward's transformation was written perfectly. :D Carlisle made a good choice. Emma |
| Emiliana Keladry 12/27/08 . chapter 5 Is this young Esme the Esme that becomes his wife? I guess I will have to read on and find out! Amazing chapter! Emma |
| Emiliana Keladry 12/27/08 . chapter 4 The Volturi give me the creeps still and it is good to see Carlisle attempting to help them... even if Aro is much much creep. If that makes sense... Emma |
| Emiliana Keladry 12/27/08 . chapter 3 I loved the last line. It perfectly describes Carlisle and the way that he chooses to spend his existant. Good pacing of this story. :D Emma |
| Emiliana Keladry 12/27/08 . chapter 2 Hope. Yes, you have found it and so it begins. Great chapter! Emma |
| Emiliana Keladry 12/27/08 . chapter 1 That is a horrible way to "die". Poor poor Carlisle. Emma |
| cachstardust 12/27/08 . chapter 6 You update really quickly! ) Good job with this chapter. I liked the urgency at the end of the chapter, when Carlisle was struggling to control Edward, as well as the moral reasoning Carlisle uses. |
| cachstardust 12/27/08 . chapter 5 You've done a wonderful job with Carlisle's history! The historical facts themselves are well-done, and I like how you haven't spent a stiflingly long time with the 400 years. It doesn't seem overly rushed, I think, though I get the feeling that after five chapters, the story's going to really get going when he turns Edward. I'm glad I found this story- it's listed under only Carlisle, and under 'fantasy', so I would never have come across it normally (I'm usually reading "Carlisle/Esme" stuff when searching for him haha). I hope you continue, and look forward to reading more! |
