Reviews for the rainbow
justfalling 1/11/09 . chapter 1
Nice work! :)
ribbons-paws 1/10/09 . chapter 1
Well, that was a good one. I liked it. :D
the tomato 1/9/09 . chapter 1
randomness is very good
SasuSaku Forever and Ever 1/7/09 . chapter 1
this is so good! x]]
kitten1596 12/27/08 . chapter 1
i love it this seemed like a poem to me i don't know why but oh well this is really good_

!sasusaku kicks ass!
inu-babygirl 12/27/08 . chapter 1
i like it and u did a very great job and ur lemon so keep going and please up-dte ur other stories asap kay luv ya INU
whoahmamama 12/26/08 . chapter 1
ok.. that was just friggin awesome.. if that came out of nowhere..thhen its one of the best shitzz I seen for a long time..in short it was bueatifully crafted..lack of sleep...

be teh great if it wasnt a one-shot...
Strings of a Puppet 12/25/08 . chapter 1
I truly believe you are capable of writing a full lemon! (YUP!) Loved it!
Nauru 12/25/08 . chapter 1
Quite poetic. And somehow sad. Thanks for posting!
see you another day 12/25/08 . chapter 1
Hah I Love lemons. I love this one it's so poetic (:
Arctic Bowl 12/25/08 . chapter 1
I like it, but I think it could be more.

A twoshot maybe? :D
kattylin 12/25/08 . chapter 1
this is nice! too bad the lemons arent that descriptive... bu i like the idea of it
candyluver 12/25/08 . chapter 1
wow...
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only 12/24/08 . chapter 1
Sad, but AWESOME. HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
AGENT KELL 12/24/08 . chapter 1
Lol, oh dear.

:D
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