aw this is so cute! good job!

Wow. That was amazing. I remember reading the part where Tessa gave Sousuke the gift, and wondering just what he was thinking and feeling...and now I know! You did a great job at playing up the tension between Kaname and Sousuke before the kiss. They really are a great couple, and even though I admit to wondering how Tessa and Sousuke would work out, I know he's with the right person.

I must apologize for reviewing so late my friend. After our last conversation, inspiration took over and I began working on "Closure." For what it's worth, this is simply beautiful. I loved how you opened this story. The store clerk reminiscent of 'Santa' (am I right here, "Red sweater, white beard, chuckling merrily?") Both characters are so adorably clueless as to the feelings they have for one another; when it's just plain obvious. I absolutely loved the 'licking of the fingers scene.' The visual alone was hot enough for me. And the conclusion was sweeter than I could've hoped for; a meaningful kiss underneath the mistletoe. Great job as always!I'm wishing you the Happiest of Holidays!

love mistletoe by the way. it is bringing colorful christmas spirit

This story is just...adorable.

I love the resolution of the conflict between Kaname and Sosuke in this piece...and the sweet atmosphere at the end with the Mistletoe.

Thanks for this gift story, and a Merry and Blessed Christmas to you!

FREDDO

Woo... Once again, you really did great at picturing those two.
I love the way you describe Kaname's inner feelings and her inner conflicts, with her personnality, somehow quite romantic and sweet, even she hides it with a huge mask of agressiveness and violence.
Your story was very nice and pleasant to read. Thanks a lot!

And merry Christmas to you too ^^

~Tidoo

That is amazingly adorable~ I remember thinking something similar when reading the manga... if only it had gone on to something like this. This is great!