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musicisinmysoul
2010-01-05 . chapter 30
can't wait to find out what happens next please add more when you can. thank ink
Ravenscircle
2010-01-04 . chapter 30
Aww I'm so happy for her! I'm glad she doesnt have to be alone anymore even if she does have to hear Rosalie's dog comments, Alice will protect her! Please update soon!
Miss Darkmoon
2010-01-03 . chapter 30
Aww! This was really sweet! I loved all of the dog references in the chapter, like the collar and the dog house... those seriously just killed me... and the whole thing is just so cute! I love how Diana gets a place, and they just took her in... and the "lesbian" instead of "mortal enemies" thing was great too :D

I love this story; can't wait for the next update! Thanks for making my night :)
WhiteTiger18
2010-01-03 . chapter 30
I love this story! It is so amazing! Can't wait to read more.
PLEASE!
2010-01-03 . chapter 30
UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!
caradens
2010-01-03 . chapter 30
great enjoyed alot
keeping me on tender hooks
keep up the great story
saya4haji
2010-01-03 . chapter 30
omg i loved this chapter so much,i was sad at first to think of diana losing her job and then the best thing ever happened...the cullens accept her into heir family, i was truly bouncing with joy at that and then the house! wow, it was perfect and rosalies comments about adopting a dog and a dog house felt so real and fited perfectly with the story, i loved it lol

diana's simple promise to protect them and esmes back was ouching, it had the love of a family, and not the forced obedience of a pack, amazing.

well done on another immense chapter and thankyou for writting it, pls update again soon, ur story is my favourite.

more diana and alice alone time! xox
ladypink5228
2010-01-02 . chapter 30
This story is Fricken awsome!
Light-Spectre
2010-01-02 . chapter 30
I felt I should finally review as I avidly read this but... never comment.

I loved this chapter - it was absolutely heartwarming though I do generally appreciate angst. Pretty much just angst, so this is special for me. This is the best Twilight involved story I've read (of course the books included. Ahem. Look at you being far better than SMeyer.).

Doesn't matter how tired I am, I immediately read each of your updates. I'm a huge fan of all of your works, so please, keep on writing.
.Ms.Rosalie.Hale.
2010-01-02 . chapter 30
Aw...
Thats so sweet :)
I love how Esme's a huge mother figure to Diana throughout the story, whereas in others it'd be Carlisle a big fatherly figure. It's great to see Esme have a bigger character.
It's also nice to see Rosalie have a bigger character but also for her to warm up to Diana slowly and also for her to make little jokes to add some light humor into the story.
I would love to see the inside of the house (metaphorically) in the next chapter. A house built by the Cullen's with Esme's design with Alice's help plus Alice obvious wardrobe addition.
This next chapter should be brilliant as were the past ones and obviously the present.
I can't wait for the plot with the other wolves to unfold too :)
Please update soon!!
Ms.Rosalie.Hale
Ryu
2010-01-02 . chapter 30
Just as I'm thinking how pathetic I am to be checking this fic for updates so often, you post another chapter. Simply wonderful timing as always. :)
Aww, how cute... Diana becomes part of the "pack". Well, it didn't come as a surprise that the Cullens made a home for Diana, that much had been obvious for a while, but I didn't quite expect her to get a place completely her own. Esme got it wrong though, it is the rest of the family that won't be disturbed when Alice spend the night with Diana this way. XD
A doghouse indeed.
xAracnaex
2010-01-02 . chapter 30
awe this chapter was really sweet! i liked it alot and i so can't wait to read more! i def love this fic alot!
pmcc
2010-01-02 . chapter 30
WOW! What an amazing chapter. Like D I find myself stunned by this. Everything is going so well for them now. And she's 'pack' officially! Freakin A to that!! Woohoo, bring on the party! The next chapter (if it leads on straight from this) is going to be very fun. Can't wait.
You continue to set the bar in writing powerful stories. Thank you for sharing!
aurike
2010-01-02 . chapter 30
i loved the chapter!!
It's still dificult for her to see that it's family not pack, but al least she is beggining to see...and it was so dificult for her too undestand that they want her in the family ("pack"), just so simply...but she believed..and that was so sweet that they done it! although i was expecting that for long tiem now lol
Can't wait to read more! ;))
Happy New Year! :)
Amiy
2010-01-02 . chapter 30
Once again a great update. I love how well you grow the secondary characters ^^
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