Another great chapter. The race against Oswald was very good and I like how Jill intends to develop her skills for the upcoming race against Scott. I look forward to seeing who she will take on in the meantime. Great work.

Very enjoyable. I liked the references to Psych and The Fast and the Furious. I really hate Ted though. You know me, American Made all the way.

Wow. That was one very good costume party in this chapter, and I loved the jokes like the Blade bit and the references to 'Psych' and 'The League of Gentlemen'. Very funny indeed. I see you're setting up the final big race in this chapter. I'd love to see how it will turn out. But once again, you did a great job. Happy Halloween. Keep up the good work.

An excellent chapter. Rrally loved Suad's song parody and the racing action. Very funny bits with the bet for half the sandwich and Mr. Basilotta's computer error. Great job. I look forward to seeing what will happen next.

Great update to the story. Very enjoyable. A pity about Pete's car, though. Anyhow, this chapter was very good. I look forward to seeing the rest. Keep up the good work.

An excellent first chapter to this origin story for Jill and Marcie. It is much appreciated. I look forward to seeing more. Thank you very much and Happy New Year to you.