 Brian2008 2008-12-30 . chapter 1I liked the X-5's Christmas the best because of all of them (including the one with Zombies), an X-5's reunion is the one that would have been least likely to happen. |
 Lisa0316 2008-12-27 . chapter 1I really liked the format you created for this; it was a nice twist on the standard "five things" type of story. It was cool that they didn't have to be totally credible stories, especially since the last one was almost certainly how they did spend Christmas.
Of course the zombie one was the best, but that was to be expected... |
 annie200 2008-12-27 . chapter 1The zombies made me laugh. But my favourite bit?
“So,” Original Cindy said abruptly, “You and Max done the horizontal tango yet?”
Logan snorted beer out through his nose.
I can just see Logan... |
 BlueAngel137 2008-12-27 . chapter 1Love every single snippet!
THANK YOU. :-) |
 Mari83 2008-12-26 . chapter 1Great to have so many interesting snippet from so different AU’s, left open to the reader’s imagination.
2My favourite part, of course:
He kissed her. Or maybe she kissed him. It was soft and sweet and over entirely too soon. The sensation, the novelty of such actions was still new and every touch sets his misfiring nerves ablaze."
"Logan sighed as he wheeled himself into the next room. “I’ll go get the flame thrower.”
Pretty sure only you can get this resignation making Zombies seem so utterly normal just right.
“You know, Margo and Jonas adopted me when I was twelve. I guess that makes you my kid sister.”
She turned to look at him with impossibly huge eyes. “I already have a family,” she said sullenly.
“Me too,” Logan said. “Mine died. Nowadays I take what I can get and it looks like you’re a part of that.”
Interesting, fascinating scenario and pointing out similarities in a way that I’d never thought of. |
 nattylovesu 2008-12-25 . chapter 1hi
love the snippets
just to point out : Max was wearing a sleek, dark blue and falling just down ..
should be dark blue gorn..
take care and thanks for sharing
Tasha |
 shywr1ter 2008-12-24 . chapter 1Oh, Christmas!! and not one present, but six!!
I love them all -- and thank you for catering to my unending sweet tooth, where M & L are involved. The collection of different scenes, different *thems,* works so well in this collection of stories, and I love them all, even the zombies!
Hard to pick favorites, but I guess favorite moments from them all are your description of Logan's "sensation, the novelty of such actions was still new and every touch sets his misfiring nerves ablaze" ... the camaraderie of Cindy and Logan, snowed in ... the Christmas gift Logan managed for Max, despite Zack's rules, and the moment of amazement it brought to Max as its meaning dawned on her ... the kindness of an adopted Logan to the also adopted 'kid in the house'
...I love them I love them and I'm so happy that I can share them with everyone while hoarding them all for myself!! Thank you, ITL - P, and have a very, very Merry Christmas... ;} |
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