really great story. i always find roger/mark gayness interesting. good job! did lily actually exist though?

Aww...now THIS was tragic.
First of all, Mark/Roger rules my world. And I could totally see them with a cute little daughter named Lily.
I'm glad it was a dream, but...it was a very beautiful story, I liked how you wrote it in little phases, and started each one with "There was a little girl."
So sad.

This was a sweet story.
I liked the ending a lot... just that he didn't die.

aww, this was sad, but sweet! The ending didn't really make sense to me, but maybe it would if I'd read the whole story, you know? What story is it from? :)

I really liked this, though. Lily sounds so cute, and I love the beginning.

-EB91