I love this. Kyouya is a good comfort pillow for Takeshi.

This is superb!!

:) it's sad but also very deep and comforting haha I must sound strange... anyway I really liked it and thought you did a great job capturing both Yamamoto and hibari :D

wonderfully written. :)

AW! *sob* Love it! XD Your character portrayal is simply awesome1

That was good, amazing? I don't know, but it really captured every emotion I, personally, think someone, as 'carefree' as Yamamoto, would act. I loved his and Hibari's relationship, it was perfect and very well written.

You know, I've always wondered when someone would write a rawer version of Yamamoto finding out about his dad's death. This is really one of those gems, I've been waiting for :is a lazy person:.

Anyway, I love this story. The description is really well done; the words flow so beautifully and so painfully together the scenes come out vivid in my mind. I really love how you can write 8018 IC without being too overrated about them. There are a lot of scenes I like about this fic, where you simply write poetry of angst and the raw hurt of how the characters attempt to focus on the actions instead of thoughts... amongst other things I can't think straight right now, my brains are a bit muddled; so please excuse me.
Nice job!