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Reviews for: Free Falling
ReWriter15
2009-05-26 . chapter 1
Wonderfully beautiful piece of writing!
I enjoyed reading every word, =^w^=
ttraven4ever
2009-03-22 . chapter 1
Omg, I loved it. Hilarious when every one was like DUDE or like WHAT?!! IT was awesome, you are like a writing god(ess?)! you rock my ankle length sox (wo)man!
Susie Bones
2009-01-11 . chapter 1
This is gorgeous! Really, one of my favorites in a long time. :P
Anyway, this is truly brilliantly done and I look forward to more by you!
raerobgal
2009-01-09 . chapter 1
That story is too cute and I loved how you wrote about how they fell and all the emotions runnign theough them. It was so cool! :)
Amoral Philosopher
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
Great job! It seems to me that One-Shots are one of the hardest types of stories to write due to the limited amount of time to work a buildup, but you pulled this one off marvalously. This just goes to show that if an author is skilled enough they can make any story, regardless of length, good. Good luck with breaking the writer's block and I look forward to the next chapter of The Cruelty of Hope.
Wonderbee31
2008-12-27 . chapter 1
Thank for the neat fic here, and a fun and warm read to say the least. Looking forward to your next wonderful writing.
Scarlet
2008-12-27 . chapter 1
Magnificent! I thoroughly LOVED reading this story. The fall itself is a very intense moment and I really wish it would've gone on for longer. ^^ I actually went back and read the bit again because it was well worth it.

A very well written story overall, characters almost perfectly... well, in character, and I love the bits of humour you added to relax the atmosphere in the end. Although personally, I would've let the free fall moment expand more.

But then again, just how tall can their tower get?

~Scarlet.
Hunter Greene
2008-12-26 . chapter 1
awsome story the end was funny i love cy
Astalavisbay
2008-12-25 . chapter 1
Free falling, wow. This is so cool! The Rob/Rae was kept In character and the plotline was so sweet (and, if I may say: Fluffy.) I like Cy's last line, it made me laugh like, ROFL.
camry72
2008-12-24 . chapter 1
Merry christmas
candypink26
2008-12-24 . chapter 1
this is great! lol, cy almost got a heart attack when he saw them fall... ^__^ i luv RobRae!
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