There's a lot of potential here. It was a golden moment when Kain emerged from the tent carrying the newborn baby in his hands. I would love to see if this will progress further for it could be a lovely story.
^_^

AW!
TOO CUTE!

that was a cute start. I see quite some potential from this story. I would be happy if you continued soon.

hm...interesting start. I wouldn't mind seeing a longer chapter.-Lil V.