Nice! -thumbs up-

Ooh! Very interesting.

I like how everything is narrated in Hinata's perspective; it adds a large sense of mysteriousness and suspense to the entire story. And I like the wave of emotion that evelopes her.

Thanks for writing!

Update soon. This is really good.

~Kendall

I've never come across anyone with writing style like this. I like it. Can't wait to see where you take this story.

Jeeze, you're amazing to be able to make your fic read like a manga. I could totally imagine it, everything with the panels and close-ups a manga should have. I also loved the part where he grabbed her wrist and pulled her up against him. The way you added in the fluttering of the papers made me squeal. Reading this makes me feel like I'm watching anime.

*Jaw drops* How DO you DO it? I know I've been writing this a lot, but I REALLY love how you've laid out Hinata's thoughts. It's so easy to understand, yet complicated at the same time. Lucky Hinata got to see Sasuke smile. ^__^ I'm quite jealous, really, but this IS a sasuhina story, so whatev. LOL.

It's funny, you're summary was what lured me into reading the fic in the first place. Beautiful descrpitions, realistic thoughts, yet very little dialogue. Amazing. ^__^

Hey there ShikaruTo-sama! It's been awhile, hasn't it?

First off, I'd like to say that this was a short, yet beautiful prologue. Hinata's thoughts are so clear and vivid, which easily allows me to imagine myself in her place.

I've reviewed the first chapter, now onto the next! lol.

This is a cute story. I hope you will update soon. ^_^

wow love this story, really interesting and i cant wait for you to update! but when are you going to update Tomato Bosom as well? hope you update soon for either fic. i love your work and your one amazing writer! update soon!

awesome story keep going

very interesting first time i meet sasuhina written in such a way definitely worth reading i hope you will post the last chapter soon

Hohohoho.. the interaction you have there is just awesome. I love your chapters, and the subtle love between them. --sigh-sigh-- this story always gets me sighing, you know? The repetitiveness is a great point that make the story so beautiful. And I'll so check out The Denial Twist. Thanks for the reccomendation.

Wow. The last line took my breath away. That was so beautiful! :D This story reads like a diary for me. And I'm glad that you take things slowly, subtly. H.. I feel like failing in love...

And btw, I'm also a die-hard fan of My Agony as an Agony Uncle. Superb story, that.

Wow.. this is really turning really good. The story's so sweet and slow-paced but not boring. I love the scarce but beautiful description you put in your stories. -h-- makes this worthwhile.