damn, very fluffy and cute! Good job.

Aww that was nice, really.

Ha ha, you HAD to include Ariados in there somewhere didn't you?

I am actually pretty shocked that this is only the first review. Oh wait, PinkFlowershipping is not any of the "Holy Sextet" of ships so oh mai, it must be a failure! Pah, people have no taste...

I'm not a PinkFlowershipper, but dayum my girl this was good. So fluffy and adorable and both Erika and Whitney were done fantastically in character. Am I right in thinking that Orion cried upon reading this? If so I can see why, I really can. That present scene towards the end was so very touching.

Loved the ending too. I think i'm more of a sucker for implied smut than the actual stuff... xD

So yes. Ten out of ten and a badillion internets from me. You need to write yuri fluff more often ktnxbai.