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Daryl
2009-06-26 . chapter 2
great story. you write some of the best harley/ivy
SilverTurtle
2009-02-11 . chapter 2
*laughs hysterically* My goodness, I do love these stories. Your characterizations are so much fun. I was practically rolling on the floor during the Evelyn/Ivy 'I'm nothing like her' bit. Ivy is very good at deluding herself isn't she? And man, it was really easy to intensely dislike Harley's family; imagining growing up with parents like that actually hurts. Ivy's admission of love was pretty subtle, I hadn't noticed that she hadn't said it out loud in previous parts. Capping this one with Harley's shrinking bikinis was golden.

I finally have something to look forward to on Valentine's Day, and it isn't a box of candy! I'll be waiting for the conclusion of this trilogy.
shinneodeus
2009-02-10 . chapter 2
What a nice story. The profile that Ivy did of Harley was very fascinating. Makes perfect sense with the DCAU.
Kimberly T.
2009-02-01 . chapter 2
Great story! Looking forward to the third in the trilogy!
immortal7
2009-02-01 . chapter 2
that was a nice touch for the end. I always enjoy reading stories on this pairing because they make sense. They very much need each other and actually compliement each other. till next time later.
List of Romantics
2009-01-31 . chapter 2
Nicely Done, Allaine! That was bloody well written and very touching, I hadn't expected anything like what happened.

Man, Harley had it bad. Those are the kids you here about committing suicide because they can't meet their families' unrealistic expectations -or end up neck deep in drugs. Criminal or not, her story is heart breaking: giving up what you love; chasing impossible standards for approval and love (which should be freely given- the b@stards!); degrading yourself, selling yourself for a grade; then shakin' up with Mr. j. I'd say her family got off light.

While I love Harley and Ivy, reading this goodness can't help but make me wish you still had your hand in KiGo. But, I suppose you must follow your muse and inspirations.

How much longer on "Reap What You Sow?"

Very well done, Allaine.
Chrissy Sky
2009-01-31 . chapter 2
I was going to say, I almost hope you do one of these every holiday. XD Can't wait for the Valentine's installment.

I really enjoyed watching Ivy grow a little more in this. Nice job.
Wispr
2009-01-31 . chapter 2
Bloody cute chapter. Love how you did their families. Came across very believable and gave the characters even more personality depth.

Can't wait for more!

Wispr
Invader Johnny
2009-01-31 . chapter 2
Amazing, it just amazes me that two women such as Harley and Ivy would have so very ** up parents.

No wonder they became criminals.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
KimImpossible
2009-01-29 . chapter 1
interesting storyline - wonder how this one will turn out - how do you come out to your parents at xmas that you are sleeping with a beautiful insane lesbian supervillian with green skin -
Rachel
2009-01-24 . chapter 1
Meet the Parents, with Ivy and Harley, loved the first chapter, the characters, the conversations, and how your moving forward with the relationship. I really loved how a bored Ivy is a horny Ivy..hehe.

Will be looking forward to you finishing it I hope, its a wonderful story.
Raggleraggle
2009-01-21 . chapter 1
I loved this, great first half of the story, I can't wait to see how you'll end it :D
DreamShadower
2009-01-21 . chapter 1
Oh my, what chaos will ensue. Christmas is always fun. Nothing like a little awkwardness to add to it.

Wondering how this will all work out. Somehow the whole family is just going to be there.

Oh, what will happen when they find out that it's Ivy underneath all that clothing?
MeleeQ
2009-01-04 . chapter 1
LOVE this! I hope you continue it soon! :D
Chrissy Sky
2009-01-03 . chapter 1
Oh, I'm eager and anxious to see how their holiday goes. I have a feeling that Ivy's going to agree to tree decorating next year... XDD
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