This is such a cute story XD I wish you continued it :P But its AWSOME!

HOPE YOU MAKE A NEW CHAPTER !

I liked the dialogue in this. The narrations a tiny bit choppy but overall it flows well. Also the plot's pretty good. You have a nice handle on the character's interactions with one another. I enjoyed how sweet Ichigo was to Orihime but he was his usual self to Renji and Rukia. I also liked the scene between Renji and Ichigo when he found out Rukia was pregnant. I liked he could give Renji advice.

aw
that was soo cute!
wha

holy crap, I'm gonna cry! Its so sweet! I love it! Keep up the good work!

omg it so cute

It was lovely! I wonder how will Renji's and Rukia's baby look like...

i loved it you should continue it i want to know about RenRuki's kids and IchiHime's kids there power it has to be continued has to.

This story was absolutely adorable (: . I loved it so much :D . I love the thought of Inoue and Ichigo being together in the future as husband and wife and them having a baby

this is beautiful.. i'm gonna alert it.. in case u decide to make it longer than a one-shot.. which i highly recommend. =)

So cute! I love it! *thumbs up* Maybe you should try it, for more than a one shot! It will be awesome!
-Thail

so sweet and heart warming! akio is a nice name for a boy, it means "Bright boy"

Aww!! This was just so cute! I like this story a lot, it was absolutely wonderful, just simply amazing!^.^

please continue the story!
it was so good
you have to write about the twins growing up and stuff
that would be AWESOME!!1

heya!!
thanks for the wonderful fic!

but this is simply BEAUTIFUL!

i love the little exchange between ichigo n renji. classic!

and the twin's changing eye-color was very creative.

great job!!

p.s. i've been waiting for yer needs: orihime for ages.