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Tricki
2009-08-29 . chapter 21
Best. Ending. EVER! Hyper-flaily-awesomeness is being had down here in Australia! Well done and thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story!

I enjoyed it immensely - and Lynely & Havers' hospital scene was the awesome :D

x
Tricki
2009-08-29 . chapter 20
It was a really good ending, but not the one I wanted :P Also, how can Sam afford to live in Belgravia?? haha
Tricki
2009-08-29 . chapter 19
Wow, that was actually kind of heartwrenching. Well written.
Tricki
2009-08-29 . chapter 18
Great chapter - doesn't feel rushed at all. I don't know how it took me so long to find it!

xx
mirrorOfsin
2009-08-18 . chapter 21
Ahh came back from holiday and found this finished woo! Loved the last ending the best and it was a great fic!
JUMA
2009-08-16 . chapter 21
sque. even better! best ending ever!
Faith
2009-08-15 . chapter 21
Hi Shadow, I read your story and enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing your efforts with the rest of us fans. I like the third ending the best, everyone happy.
s
2009-08-15 . chapter 21
Maybe I'm a sucker for tidy endings but I liked this ending the best. As for having not enjoyed writing it never comes thru in the writing. I enjoyed reading it immensely. I also want to thank you for not only sticking it out to the finish but also thank you for writing Foyle's War fan fiction because there is so little out there and you're a great writer. Please keep writing FW fan fics. Thanks.
Katie Duggan's Niece
2009-08-15 . chapter 21
That's definitely my favorite of the three endings, and it's wonderful that you saved it for last!

For a heart-stopping moment I thought you were going to arrange it so that everything had been a dream while Lynley was in a coma, but I'm glad you took the other way out and made it a shared time-travel experience for him and Havers. I'm glad too that you allowed Foyle and Sam to work things out, and happily too.

As for your not enjoying the writing of this, good for you for sticking it out, and of course the nice thing about fanfiction is that there's always the next story to work on. If you didn't produce the effect you wanted before, you can always aim for it in an upcoming fanfic.

Thanks for writing.
britgirl
2009-08-15 . chapter 21
Thank you so much for sticking with this story. This was probably my favorite ending--I like the happily-ever-after! Are you sure your muse doesn't want to write one more ending showing Foyle and Sam immediately after Tommy and Barbara go back? Thanks for all your stories.
CrazyMaryT
2009-08-15 . chapter 21
Of the three I think this is my favourite scenario (although I liked all three endings). Everyone was happy and that's great! Again I'm sorry this fic is ending. I know you wrote you struggled but I don't feel that came through in the story. I really enjoyed this like you wouldn't believe. Thank you again for sharing your wonderful idea.
pook
2009-08-15 . chapter 21
Lovely WAFie ending, Sam. This ending was great too. Thanks for an entertaining story too.
Katie Duggan's Niece
2009-08-14 . chapter 20
I enjoyed that ending; it was a touch bittersweet yet still happy.

One does wonder how Sam will make the adjustment to the 21st century, and of course how Mr. Foyle adjusted to Havers. I love the idea of them nurturing those war orphans.
Juma
2009-08-14 . chapter 20
I like this ending :)! I can see how Havers would be happy in the 50ies... thanks for a great story!
Katie Duggan's Niece
2009-08-13 . chapter 19
"And then it started to rain." A perfect last sentence.

I thought the transition back to the present was appropriate, but of course it broke my heart to hear of the Havers-Lynley estrangement, and of course it was a little bit unsettling to hear Sam married Andrew (but at least someone got married!).

Eagerly awaiting the next two encores...
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