great writing. but omg, was that creepy. i mean leah just killed nessie. i dont like nessie really, but the way you put it just freaked me out. on the other hand, it was very written, clear, and the plot was good. A+

Interesting spin on the imprinting issue, i'm of the same mind as leah on this issue for sure, i think imprinting is totally wrong, there's no choice at all & it's totally one-sided! lol i would rather have seen bella die though haha, when she told leah to get out of her house i wanted to sock her one in the face!

wow! this is really good :P
so, leah killed nessie? awwh. anyways, this was really unique, and well written, good job :)

WOW!

This is FREAKING AMAZING! IT was wonderful. Ur an amazing author!

wow, i dont know why but i really like this. and why is it rated M?

Wow. That was...wow. This was great. I really, really like it.

... how in the hell was that a jacob/leah and why is it rated M

Nessie's dead?

Hell YES!!

Wow. The ending was just... wow. Twisted, morbid, and utterly amazing.

Awesome. :)

god i'm sad for leah and jacob and nessie and everyone else.

i don't really read fanfiction much, but boy am i glad i read this!

really interesting plot. i loved the way you wrote leah. i loved the way you wrote jake's denial. really masterful writing.

Ohh! I loved it! AMAZING! So amazing! Just...words can't explain how good it was! I mean...WOW! Speechless, I think just might explain how good it is since I can't! Going into my favorites. ^^

Wow, that was intense, to say the least. As twisted as the ending was, I thought it was really well done. Bravo!

i luved it i never liked IT much! lolz fABBY JOB!