That was really, really good! 8D

fantastic! I really love how this story is written, it captures their personalities so well and creates so much imagery! I have been checking this story for updates every once in a while so I would really love it to be expanded! 8D keep up the great work!

that was an interesting take on things. Not what I expected in the least but still good. I like the line about how gryffindors usually act before they think

I liked this! Very different but still lovely!

I liked this line: Seamus has tried and failed, tried and failed; he’s still lost, still in ruin and confusion. But he hasn’t stopped being alive deep down beneath the somnific layers of winter. There’s no excuse for not clambering, fighting and bleeding, to reach the edges of sunlight.

It's very different and poetic in my opinion!

That was really good in a weird, detached sort of way. :) I've favourite'd it, just so you know, too.