I love the way you wrote everyone in this story (especially Bella)
So well written. This is easily one of my favorie one-shots.

one of the best one shot i have read.

I like this :)

Very well-written.
Great job, again.

P.S. Merry Christmas!

I like the idea of being able to fight the imprint- i think it's the sort of thing Jake would do.
Your characters are done really well- i like how you portrayed Bella because it is the part that goes unnoticed in the book. Poor Reneesme though.
This was a really good story. Well done.
Keep on writing and Merry Christmas.
Geth342

It's very nicely written. I love the witty dialogue.
Wish there were more!