AW! how sweet. I love Kurogane, he's so cool and everyone knows he's a big softy. lol. It must have been destiny for me to read this story since I just barely finished watching the episode when they arrived in that city. Thank you for sharing this story with everyone. It was great!

You should continue this story sometime.

AW

So Kawai!

That was pretty lovely.
Really well written.
:)

I read this last year, wanted to write a review but never did. Just read it again and actually got to writing a review.
I wanted to point out, Sakura has emerald green eyes, not sapphire blue eyes but it seems I was already beat to it. @__@
Other then that tibbit, very gewd! Keep it up! I read most of your Fire Emblem stories too. Ike/Soren ftw! WE LIEK IKE! DX


And lol Liz Lacey @ pointing that out, that totally flew by me until you mentioned that. And the the thought of "Do they even have Dixie cups in Outo?" XD

Yay, cute story, I love friendship fics. ^_^ Good keeping in character, in my opinion at least. Por Fay-san! Good thing he has big ol' Kuro-wan-wan to watch over him. ;) Nice story, thanks for writing.

Awesome^^ I love Fay! I'm glad to find afanfic where he is not with Kurogane XD I espeiclaly love the part about him dreaming about Fay and Ashura-o and then trying to act as if evrtyhing was alright^^ You manage to stay in character, that's awesome^^

wow. well, that was... well i... see?? now uve got me speechless :L in short, i loved it :P hehe x

I'm sorry but i seriously started laughing when I read the part where Fay was spread-eagle. It reminded me of "Chicago". But i quickly sobered up when I read the part where Fay-chan puked his guts. Must you always torture your favorite characters? OH!! Kurger-burger had red eyes? wow I didn't know that...wow this review is random. Over all I liked this story between these two.

Elda- I wonder whats Gonna happen~nya

Yes, like it! Even new to the series, I can totally relate to the characters. Friendship is very important, and the details are very good. I like the randomness of the dixie cup. Not just any plastic cup, a DIXIE cup! Hahaha, can't wait for more!

If you made Kurogane talk less, I think he'd be more in character. He's really quiet. He may be thinking a million things at once, but he'll say very little -and it will either be profound or pissed.

Otherwise, cute story. Nicely written and if you made any mistakes, I didn't catch them.

Keep up the nice work.

Nice story! It was simple, but the way you wrote it made it seem so real and sweet! Kurogane was a little OOC, to be honest, but hey, even my Kurogane is a little OOC, so I guess I don't have the right to say it.

Hope to see more of your writing soon!

This is really sweet, I love Kuro-puppy taking care of Fai like he should *g*. I do have one issue though, you have written that Sakura widened her sapphire eyes-aren't they green (which would be emerald) not blue?