I love this team too! Great Shep whump-great story!

This was really great! Completely loved the Shep wump but especially loved how Rodney and Ronon were messing with a very drugged up Sheppard at the end. Very funny. Why didn't we see some of that on the show? Thanks for sharing.

OK. I'm so catching up on my fics. I loved it. So wished Shep was subdued like that on the show. The last chapter was absolutely hilarious. I could so see them all doing that.

Great story.

Lmao! The lasting impression i have from this fic is the hilarious exchange at the end. I was laughing from "Up?" onwards - the whole scene is absolutely adorable and i can just imagine his confused determination as he says "Atlantis", lolol. But my favorite part of this story is the flashback to the Council overwhelming John. Him lying helpless and at their mercy on that bed while Jaws places the disc where he wants? AUGH! You were killing me with that scene (in an awesomely good way). This one's going on my favourites for sure, and i'm going to go read that scene again a few times. M.

Poor John. I love that Teyla's going to take revenge in the gym on the guys on his behalf. Thanks for sharing this.

The descriptions of John's agony are incredibly vivid. Teyla is really well written here as well.

Great concept and execution. John's inability to hide anything from Teyla and his instinct to protect everyone at the expense of himself are beautifully conveyed.

Great tension throughout. I love how John can't hide anything from Teyla.

Very,very good! This story was as excellent as a real episode. I could see everything just as though I were watching it. I really wish you could write some of their scripts. Thank you so much and write again soon. God bless you.

What a great story. Shep-whump, peril where he thought he was safest, and amongst friends, and the team all there to pull him out of danger. Thank goodness each of them in their own way was alert to something fishy going on. If Rodney hadn't been dragged along much against his will he wouldn't have found the signal and blocked it. You didn't mention what befell Jaws and his cronies so I'm allowing my imagination to dictate that the original five were swiftly and totally wiped out by Lorne and the marines. Leniency was too good for them.

Thanks for writing and sharing the adventure.

Kitty -

Loved the voodoo chicken priestess. I was laughing out loud.

That was great. Loved every moment of it. Wonderful Shep whump and lovely team love, and not too much of Rodney.

YAY! Team fic. Always the best! Thanks for a whumped John and a team rescue effort. (And Keller in the infirmary, where she belongs. *g*)

Nice job.

Great story. Nice little Christmas gift. Thanks