Thank you for the good story^^

please update! i just got in to horror stories today and so far ive read 2 and theyre all good i love your story ^.^ i wonder whats next <..>

Alright, now get ready because some of this is going to be harsh. I thought I needed to take my mind off things to read something else beside the usual stuff I read, so I decided to read a Halloween fic since I never really read one.

I stumbled upon this and went ahead to read it. I ended up greatly disappointed. One: Your OC is a Mary Sue so far, she has sex with a murder and doesn't kill her, she has the bestest friend, and she risks her life and nothing, NOTHING bad happened to her? Supposely, Micheal was cursed to kill his family members and be roughtless. So I am confused how she was able to make a killer fall in love with her so fast. Two: Micheal feels too OOC, he is evil now... and he no longer has an innocent soul.

Sadly, this fic is bad, like very bad. I feel like this fic was only written mainly for your main character. Also, this is way too mushy...

hope theres another chapter

love

^__^ Kitty!
...just IMAGENE michel..naked and thrusting into your body. O_O

*dies from the pictures that turns up into head

lol That would so be me. "And, of course, the cat." So cute!

love it

I liked chapter 2! Michail came back! Mwahaha! Keep writing! I look forward to reading!

i absolutly loved it! do u plan on more or was it just a one-shot? either way is fine with me. ^_^

loved it