fine I normaly don´t beg for anithing but ok you got me I want a sequel please please please
great story. marry christmas

Wonderfully sad story. Would definitely love a sequel.

A little side note though, maybe you could spell check your work before posting, and also their last name is "Winchester".

ok, just so you have a meantal picture in your head. i am on my knees in fronm of you, my head is bend up to look at you, my hands clapsed in front of my in prayer formation, and i have a pleeding look in my eyes. i open ,my mouth to speek, "pleas, pleas, i'm begging you, ill die if you dont get out a sequal. my heart just annot take it. i have to know what happens to poor Sammy!"

scean ends. yeah so obviously i though that it was really good or i would not be begging for a sequal. heck you could problably make this into a whole story line. it was really creative of you to explain what was going on with Sammy and how he couls see auras and the power in them. cant wait to read what you cook up next.

Okay, so now I'm begging for a sequel! I NEED to know how this ends... A very interesting look at things though! I always wondered if Jess could have been pregnant... Thanks for such an awesome BEGINNING!

Merry (Insert Holiday in Which You Celebrate Here),
The Grey Phantom

I love this! I'd love to see a sequel/second chapter of this! Poor Sam!