nice

Will Harry be gaining the Gland as well?

Sweet story. I hope that you will keep at it.

Holy Shit!! You have no idea how happy I am to see this here. Congrats on being the first to do this particular cross over. Loved your version of Petunia, and the great divergence form cannon that I foresee coming. Wonder what Tommy Boy and Dumbles will think of this 'power he knows not'. So any of the other groups or powers from Tsukihime going to appear in this story? I'm also a little concerned that a T rating may not be high enough for this story. Can't wait for more!!

Wery sorry but the only word that I can use to sum my thoughs about this is: pointless. Nuff said.

sweet story! can't wait for more! :)

is it still being updated? i didn't see it in any of your lists in your profile... :)

just wondering... :o

I have to say this was brilliant. The idea of these two together sounded great but I loved your execution, which pulled off the heavy darker side that Tsukihime read like well. I loved it and I want more!

Oops, sorry for not reviewing this earlier.

Anyway, nice chapter. Troll bit was a bit too detached. ow I can't wait to see how the others react to this later.

A bit rushed, nice nonetheless.

No, wait. Back up a bit.

Rushed. A lot. Every single time I thought that a fascinating moment was just around the corner, you skipped the whole district.

Sure, I understand the need to get to all the interesting parts, but you don’t have to be so callous about it. Unveil the story with wool, not iron, gloves.

Like Ruskbyte.

Chokushi no magan aren't hereditary.

And why is he crying?

I have to say that your Petunia is a strange one. If I were to guess, I'd say that the whole Evans family had the power Harry now have, and that is because Lily dropped the family legacy in favor of magic that Petunia started hating magic... Or at least Lily, Petunia and someone else had it (the knife feels like something that must be passed to the Heir... Explaining why Petunia recognized it)

That analysis of the troll seems almost mechanical, to me...

Am I right to guess that Albus ignored Harry's headaches because he thought they were due to Voldemort? (and is now wishing he had not...)

Oh! And I guess that Harry not being in prison for whatever he did at Gringots tells that some, if not all, magical creatures (but not the half-bloods) at least know of his kind... (and speaking of prison, I wonder if dementors have death lines... ;-D )

Please, update soon!

I'm sry but that last part should have been Harry laughing his ass off not bawling like a baby

excellent work

Dang, indeed a different Petunia, and looking forward to seein more of her, as well as seeing the aftermath of Harry going completely Ape on the Troll.

I really don't get it.

I thought that he was some offspring of the Nanaya clan, or some family related to them, but now that you gave him also a characteristics seen only in members of the Ryouga, I don't know what he is supposed to be.

How the second personality was created? Is it Voldemort's soul fragment? But it wouldn't explain why Harry can do all this crazy stuff Shiki was able to do without any training.

I rather liked the Petunia scene - imagining Petunia Dursley fighting like some super-assassin while wearing an apron made me smile, even if raised more questions, than gave answers.

I also don't like how you overplay the whole non-human thing and Harry's reactions. No matter what kind of creature he meets he acts like Shiki when he first saw Arcueid (and you can't be more 'unnatural' than her) - his reactions are too strong when he encounters mostly hybrids (Shiki didn't have to stop himself from killing Akiha whenever he saw her). If wizards and creatures that HP encounters are such abominations that make him go:

OMG! I HAS TO KILL! CUT! KILL!

then why didn't Gaia interfere before? Why wizards, trolls, and goblins still exist?

It leads me to my question: how many elements from the Nasuverse exist in your crossover? Does Association exist or the Burial Agency? If yes, what is they stance about wizards? Do they treat them as heretics or allow them to do whatever they want?