 Fairy of the Flames 2009-11-17 . chapter 16:( In Charm's Way was honestly one of the best and the worst Gwevins of Season 3. I really hope that Kevin can patch this up. I feel sad now because of what happened. Charmcaster is still my favorite villain. |
 Atlashon 2009-11-16 . chapter 16Actually, I thought tht Kevin will do something hilarious to make up to her... Anyways, awesome fic... |
 Katara1439 2009-11-15 . chapter 16It was not depressing.Gwen is right there is a day they will talk about she is just not ready. Kevin just need to give her some space.
In Charm's Way i cried at the end.I thought that was sad but it was a good esp. i hope they have them mad at each other for a little while just to see what is going to happen.Keep going with this story line it's really good i think.
~Katara1439 |
 RavenFeathersOfDarkness 2009-11-15 . chapter 16...Wow, cool story, and I totally agree, I don't think the whole fight will be resolved quickly. I really like this story, it was my very first Ben 10 fanfiction and I am not disappointed. |
 Fairy of the Flames 2009-11-10 . chapter 15this was interesting... I don't know if I'd like this, because his life does get messed up after a while. at least in Ken 10. which I consider a what if non cannon area.
Have fun with NaNoWriMo! |
 Katara1439 2009-11-02 . chapter 14love |
 plum-dulce 2009-10-19 . chapter 14Loved it
*HUGS* |
 Fairy of the Flames 2009-10-19 . chapter 14*clap* very good! I liked the poem-like one. I liked it more then Questioning, but that was still good too.
Reading Ben 10 makes me happy, so I'm not very flamy. you should consider yourself lucky. |
 immature-girl 2009-10-19 . chapter 14i really like it! n.n this proves they're perfect for each other...! |
 Atlashon 2009-10-19 . chapter 13" U dnt hv to if u dont want to " ,Gwen said that in 3 epi. of season 3 i think... lol
Gd chapter |
 Phantom Rottweiler 2009-10-19 . chapter 13I think ya' should read MORE horror, especially if it's S.King. - an all time great writer :)
That part about freaky Devlin worked perfectly for the nightmare, and the part 'bout Kevin worrying about being a dad would be a plausible happening. |
 Perhapsormaybe 2009-10-18 . chapter 13...eww. Chills. Sorry, having a baby boy myself it's very hard to read a story where one gets hurt...or hates a parent. Poor Kevie...I think he really would be worried about being a father. Great chapter! |
 Phantom Rottweiler 2009-09-26 . chapter 12Wow. Deep.
Somehow you did it in a way that I could see everything like it would be in an episode of the show; extra credit for you :) |
 Fairy of the Flames 2009-09-26 . chapter 12This was well written, good job! |
 Fairy of the Flames 2009-09-25 . chapter 11You are very good at Gwevins, don't get me wrong, but the Obsession one with BxJ was my favorite. I don't know why. you are very good! |