Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

I do hope you resume this story some day.

*removes his Jaw from the floor*

BLOODY HELL!

You are full of surprises! In the positive turn i mean.

Please continue the story very very soon.

Hey this is good! Where's the rest? :) Anyway, if you are going to finish it (which I hope) I'd love to help you. I love Magneto, and though all of my stories have been self removed from fanfiction, I would like to borrow your plot or your actual story if you don't want to continue. (I only ask because its been over a year.) If your looking for some where to go with it, try having him run into Wanda. She's a witch/mutant so he could meet her by accident then meet their father. Also, I would take an 'Erik is appalled by Harry's past', though struggles against his desires to use him to defeat the norms. Or maybe have him meet an X-man and then have him freeze up when Erik comes to X/ or in a battle against him.

There are so many ways to take this story, and it is a very good X-men crossover concept!

Really good please update soon!

Interesting chapter. Was the red flash meaning that the lady lied? And why did Matt's dark mark disappear when it was about to be revealed? Was it his power as a mutant? I hope you update.

will you update it?

Hey I love the story. Please please please keep going. It's really different from everything I have read so far.

I really love it! I can't wait to read the next part. Keep up the great work!

sweet

I like it.

I like what you are doing with this story. I cannot wait till Matt meets the mutants. Thanks for sharing what you have, I cannot wait for more.

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER, UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

interesting story and plot so far, hope to see this updated soon.