Whoah! OMG, that was hot! You totally have Bree down. I'm a big Desperate Housewives fan, and I could see Bree have these internal dilemmas going on in her head, while alternately feeling both tremendous attraction and moral corruption in regards to Lorelai. The whole cupcake debacle was amazing and incredibly sensuous. Please continue this! I have to see how Bree does cupcakes and Lorelai. Lol! Besides, after a buildup like this, it feels so incomplete. Great story and a wonderfully mismatched, yet complementary pairing!

How did I miss this before? Oh golly this was so good. I was on the edge of my chair, both screaming at them to get GOING for goodness sake and yet at the same time reveling in the deliciousness of the sexual tension building and building and BUILDING until I thought I couldn't stand it anymore and I was loving every second.

The details filled in to give the story the usual well rounded shape we all expect of anything you write. The characters came alive. I expect you to write our favorite Innkeeper so well but you were wonderful with Bree!

And yes, the title. *S* Anyone who's never seen "Better than Chocolate" should.

Thank you my friend.

Patti

WOW
i loved it
interesting pairing i must add.
write more please x

guh! aah! omg..seriously?

*dies*

what an amazing gift! i bow to you, sir, for being able to pull off such an unlikely (yet perfect!) pairing with such fire and intensity and realism.

there's so much about this that i loved...choconillacherry!? BRILLIANT! loved that!! i loved the depth and the character reflection you put with bree - the reader would have no idea that you had to go back and do research on bree and the show. i was very impressed with how dead on she was, especially with her struggling to accept her growing feelings for lorelai. the banter between them was priceless - and the entire concept of the cupcake/batter - PERFECTION! i was knitting while i read the kissing passage and i messed up my stitches and had to fix an entire row because i was so caught up in the hotness of it!

i loved the end and the set up for the next chapter - bree was so perfectly in character while she challeneged lorelai with her prim and proper (yet subtly devilish) offer. i can't wait to see where you go with this!

amazing job!! and another million points for the title - perfect!!

...I presume there is no chance to see all that on screen...would lead to a serious shortage in water...cold water...very cold water
A totally fascinating story...I could see the two interacting...and I liked what I saw...and now off to the shower::)

GREAT WORK