This is awesome!! I thoroughly enjoyed it!!
Thanks for this! ^.^
There were a few punctuation errors, like missing speech marks and stuff, but overall it was great.
Well done! Keep up the good work. =D

One question: is General Grumman really Riza's grandfather or did you make that up as well??

Love,
Niki

The story is great so far! ^.^
Riza's past is so sad. :(
I love Roy and how sweet he is to Riza!! =D
I just wanted to know though, is Roy really Xingese/part-Xingese or did you just make that up? Cuz I was pretty sure that he was Amestrian up until I read the previous chapter of this story. =S
I'm just a bit confused...

that was a long story. but i loved it anyhow. loved everybit of it...except the very detailed stuff of flashbacks...but i love it anyway...i hope to read more of your fanfics soon. :)

This chapter made me tear up. The presence of Riza's mother is beautifully crafted. Bravo. This story is wonderful. You really have a talent. Roy is as romantic as ever and Riza is very believable. Her "past" definitely explains a lot about what we see in her in the present.

i loved it! goo job!

Roy and Riza sure didn't waste any time starting a family. :)

Great story. I really enjoyed this.

personally i loved he entire story, but you should be able to tell that by all my reviews.

inupupby5

I love this fiction so much! I especially adore how you used Hell in the title of both fictions that related to holidays and how you had Roy and Riza have twins in each one. Totally awesome.

You are by far the best writer on this website and I can't wait to read the rest of your works. Keep up the wonderful work!

I liked this one it was really good and i loved the ending

OMG it did last 'til March, but it was an awesome story and twins of course.

This was so cute. Kawai! XD

I loved this and this is easily the best fanfiction I've read for FMA in a while. You should do a sequal for Roy and Riza's kids. At least tell us their names! Please?

Thanks and keep writing. :D

Lol, I review alot, and Inbox Cluttering is fine! YAY REPLIES! I just love your storys so much, I have to Review, You know?

I hated the fact that my first completed story was 13 chapters long, so I understand exactly where you are coming from! I love the last line, that was adorable. I am looking forward to reading the final chapter.

Aw. your storys are always so cute! I love them!

I like how they responded to the gifts very much. Great chappie can't wait for the epilogue!