Link should really reconsider Zelda's offer. He needs to become her knight so that they may have cute little romance scenes together.

Nice~~
Update soon!!

This is good. Some parts are repetitive, but I truly do like the backstory of his name, and his family, and now, the evil that is spreading down his ARM! HYSTERIA! ...!

So, all I can say is work on your tenses, and read over it carefully, to make sure there are no run-on sentences, incorrectly placed commas (there were a few in here, so just watch out), and you'll be running high, fine as wine!

Wow! This is a great story!
It tells how Link came to Ordon...
Very well written. Please update soon!!