OMG! AWESOME CHAPTER!! Edward's gonna stop being a heartbreaker YAY! & Jasper asked Alice out FINALLY! YAY! I can't w8 till you post the next chapter xDD

Aww I like this chapter a lot, and i love your taste in music, Mayday Parade and then We the Kings?! Genius :D
Please update soon! Im hooked! :D

Haha made me laugh so much, - "battle cry like a dying walrus"
Really love this! Its on alert etc now, well done for the summer school too! :) Calico

Thought I'd read another one of yours, and im hooked! Its really good, I love Bad-ass Edward :D and Bad-ass Bella for that matter! :D Please keep updating... :D

Calico Rayne

Haha, I once took a flight from LAX to Seattle and it was about an hour and a half.
It would probably be two hours from Forks to Pheonix, maybe two and a half.
Surely not eight.
But I loved this story, I had to click on it just becuase I love the song Sunsets and Car Crashes.
I'm reading a fic right now called The Artist in the Ambulance, I really only read it because, again, LOVE the song, but its actually a good fic.
Anyways, yeah.
Going to keep reading.

I'm confused. Is the story complete?

Agh, it ended. Hurry up and update this soon.

Hey! great story cant wait to read more!-Aarica.

YOU MUST UPDATE! NOW or so help me...

aaw that was really good :) im so glad for edward.
please update soon :)

i knew it was jake :D great chapter, but i'd like more interaction with Edward, Emmett and Jasper and Bella. Especially Edward and Bella :D

haha lol i loved that. :D the whole chapter was pure awesomeness ;D

wow
this story is soo good :D

amazing chapter! i LOVED that last bit :D

yay :D really like this