So far so good. I will wait for the next chapter, hurry up!

Very cool story so far.

Magnificent story so far.

I like how you have developed the relationship between the two of them, and yet at the same time kept the others involved in supporting roles having their own relationship issues.

I eagerly await the opportunity to read more of this.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

I love every scene in this cahpter, but my favorite is Dorothy eating duck fetus egg. Cute! I'm excited for the next update! I'll be waiting as always!

Dorothy and Balut. Priceless.
Most first timers eat it in the dark so that they don't get to see what they're eating. Because then they'd lose it. Actually, some still lose it even in the dark.

Great chapter! You got back into it like it was never delayed. I'll be waiting paitently for next update.

After a hundred years! You updated! Bahaha, peace. I loved this chapter! It's nice to have Mariemaia included in this fic and by the looks of it, we're going to see more of her! I'm looking forward to her appearances in the next chapters.
LOL no one can blame Quatre. XD He's too jealous during the ball. I think it's just nice to see him trying to 'get even' even it's himself that he's jealous of. Bahahahaha! But it wouldve been more fun if you wrote Dorothy getting ready to accept his offer. XD
Exotic delicacies, that's a yummy theme. Hmm you know, I think I'm having an idea who Brooke is...
I LOVED the toy crane machine part. :) And it's their first real kiss, eh? XD GO, QUATRE, GO! he actually retaliated! I love it!

Update SOON. XD

oh... i just missed 5cm/sec. i'll rewatch it tonight. :D
It just popped out of me, there is a delicacy in China, which is actually a FETUS! I was shocked at first but a friend of mine confirmed it.

bringing back to the fic... Did I feel some disappointment on Dorothy's part when Q asked Mariemeia to dance? hm...

I L O V E T H I S ! ! ! !

Love and peace Everyone!

This story is so awesome...I love it! Just make sure that your story is all in the same tense, otherwise this story is perfect!

Dude, great fic! If I were Quatre I'll totally kicked Trowa's **. I know this is a misunderstanding but that Quatre's girl.

Wow! Great story! The drama intensifies... Poor Quatre... but poor Trowa too. Its the classic mix up situation. I really love your sly Dorothy! I also love the story please update soon... I want to know how Trowa and Dorothy would explain themselves after this blunder.

My God! This is the best 4xD fic I have read in a long, VERY long time. Incredible! It started out quite slow though, but this chapter, goodness I couldn't help but gasp at the end of it! Please don't stop this fic, it's very good. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

-scriptique

Brilliant dialogue. ^^

It gets a little confusing in the latter part of this chapter, though, when the pronouns and their antecedents get a little mixed up. Otherwise, it's very minor. :)

*DW-chan likes this.* (ala Facebook :P)

Teka lang...

Reading your reviews I realized... sheyt, Pinoy ka rin? APIR! ^_^

I can has a happy. :)

With regards to this chapter: It's amusing to see Quatre so tongue-tied, struggling with his emotions when confronting Dorothy and hiding is "incriminating" deeds of inquiring (indirectly stalking?:P) about Dorothy through Relena in all that time. Funny that he can think straight in battle strategy, but Mr. Winner doesn't really win at life yet. :P

Hi Schizoid Sprite! :)

In searching for good 4xD fanfiction I chanced upon your story, and so far the elements that you have included are everything I ever wanted to see in a Quatre and Dorothy fanfic! ^_^

I'm only in the fifth chapter but I just had to pop in a review. You have nailed the characters' personalities accurately and described events, especially emotions so beautifully that you bring more than just life to the characters... you let the memory of the characters linger in your readers even long after the readers have read your fanfic. At least, I speak on behalf of those readers. :P

Including quotes to begin each chapter is a nice touch too. :) It adds more "oomph" and drama, and I specifically liked the one you quoted from "The Devil's Dictionary." :P

Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more and see this fic all the way to the end. ^^ Gambatte!