Will you ** update?

great job!

you MUST do sappy ending. There aren't NEARLY enought AR fics w/ sappy ending, let alone good ones with sappy endings,and yours is a good one. So why not see if you can pull it off. I'm betting you can.

Hannah

I love this story...
...and don't you DARE kill Yassen! If you do, I will kill you...
I can't wait for more, and please put in the details of what happens that night. PLEASE...
oh, and i hope you get better soon, (you mentioned you were sick in the AN)

*squeals* <3

(Sorry about being too lazy to log-in o,o;;) I love it 8D It's actually more than just pure smut (which I wouldn't say no to, but...), and you've kept up the characters' personalities to a T. Killing Yassen would be simply tragic... T_T Throw your fans a bone, why dontcha?

YoucanwriteslashYoucanwriteslash
and very good slash at that. I can't wait to see more from you in this story!

Is there gong to be more? I hope so! I'm not usually a big fan if slash, except when humorus, but I love this one!

Oh please don't kill Yassen! and please please please update soon! ^_^

"I know, OCC, OTT, smooshy and so Twilight"

As much as that comment made me laugh, I have to disagree! I thought the fic was fantastic! You have a great style and an excellent way for describing things. It isn't too wordy, but it still is interesting and infused with a subtle sense of humor, I really enjoy reading your writing! I love how you portray Alex as well...his flirting on the horse, oh dear god, that boy! XD Haha, and Yassen does not seem that out of character. I love the scorpion sting scene, that was one of my favorites! That and I was very impressed with your knowledge of horse back riding! You must update this soon, it's fantastic! :)

Great job! I'm really liking this so far. I really do believe you need to continue with this. :D

Yay - kisses :)

I really like the story, I can't wait for the next chapter...I say go for the soppy, implausible ending w/possible lemon!

okay, i am reviewing again because the last time i reviewed for some reason chapter five was cut short. so now you might be asking why i am reviewing chapter five on chapter six. the stupid computer wont let me review on chapter five because theres an error on the page or something.

sorry. i'll get to the point now. i liked chapter 5 once i could complete it. and i'm not a fool. i have an account.

now i have a question that you might be answer.

i haven't been able to post a story yet because my sister said that in order to post a story, i had to write it on word and that i had to save it on word. but, my mom doesn't like fanfiction so i use my sisters computer to get on fafic, but she doesnt like it when i save stuff on her computer because it takes up room.

but i dont want to start a story at the library, because they have a system that assigns you to a computer so theres not a garuntee(spelling?) i'll get the computer i need.

so could you give me an idea as to where i could put stories on fanfic, i would be eternally grateful. i already have a ton of stories, but i need a place to post them.

if you could give me an idea, i would really, really, REALLY grateful.

and its a really good story.

okay. not to sound like an idiot but what does occ stand for? good job you can write slash and once again becuz yassen is my favortie character, i'm voting for the soppy implausible ending so you can do a sequel if you so desire. at any rate, i just like yassen alive...lol