|Reviews for Pit Stop Part 2|
| Nfinity 12/29/08 . chapter 1
I have a few suggestions for how to improve your next story. Firstly, sex with a man is very different from sex with a woman. Men need to be prepared for it, because their bodies do not produce lubrication like women do. Plus, they need to be stretched because that opening is naturally tight and it would be painful and potentially harmful for someone to be entered like that.
Another thing I would suggest would be a beta, simply for ordinary typing mistakes that I noticed throughout.
Despite all this, I found your story very enjoyable.
| Pixietails 12/27/08 . chapter 1
Moar SamnDean plz.
And next time make the part 2 a chapter instead of a separate story :3