cool!

This was so good! (:

I do love Sakura's progress, and Tsunade. great writing.

Lovely. I think Sakura is a very under-appreciated character, both by the fanbase and Kishimoto himself. She can be so much more! I love how you've written her here, especially her interaction with Tsuande. 'Daughter' Of the Water' - great title, too. :)

I like analysing characters like this. Sakura is a strong kunoichi and I admire her as much as one can admire a fictional character, but many can't see past her fangirling days. I love the part where the earplug sales went up :) Stories, plotless or not, need to make a person think. And then it's all good.
Great job.

"Relentless like rushing water" is the first thing that came to my mind when I read the last line. Beautiful.

I think this is the first "Sakura-wants-to-be-a-real-part-of-Team-7" that I actually like, mainly because it spares the reader a lot of the wank that comes with the territory.

Beautifully written, as usual. And per norma, your sense of humor has a way of wriggling in. Absolutely LOVELY.

[Tsunade is in loveable character.] Very many kudos and M~n~M's to you.

What the hell...okay i KNow i have read this story before cause i reveiwed asking what daughter of water meant..so if this is a copy then thats just messed up...but if the author reposted it on a different account my only question is why..

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Very well descriptive, if I do say so myself. I now see Sakura much differently, and understand a couple things that I didn't think about before.

If you ever plan on making this longer, I am SO there. But no pressure, if you feel like this fiction has said all it could. I just like it so much, I wish it would go on, if only a little bit longer.

LOVED IT!

I love this, nice job.

Gemini