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Reviews for: Shell Shock
Gerren 7/1/11 . chapter 1
Awesome oneshot! I really liked Deidara's little comments.
Falcon's Jade 9/13/10 . chapter 1
I really did thought there would be something about flying pigs at the end when Deidara escaped or something, a pity not, oh well. Still a great story!
Wtfilurvyougmail.com 8/14/10 . chapter 1
This is sooooooo amazing! You should add more to it
Leiaah 1/14/10 . chapter 1
Wow, I fave'd this ages ago, and I just noticed I never reviewed!

My apologies.

This was very well written, Ino and Deidara were SO in character.

Also loved the witty comment that Deidara made towards the end about 'flying pigs', as Ino had mentioned earlier :D

Very well done! :)
YFate 9/8/09 . chapter 1
I laughed out loud at the end. Delightful!
knopes 9/7/09 . chapter 1
I likey. :)

Yeah, it'd be a great multi-chap, maybe how he was suspended into the village and has to stay there, no?

But anyhow, they're really cute together. :)
Lelouch the Black Knight 3/6/09 . chapter 1
Ah, I loved it! This would make a great multichapter!
Waifine 1/17/09 . chapter 1
I like! The punchline at the end was cute are hell! This would be awesome as a multi-chapter!
LeoCookie 1/13/09 . chapter 1
Aww man.. i was pretty disappointed to learn that you'll probably won't be writing another chap ( This story is very good,I love Deidara's "playfulness" towards Ino and her reactions are cute lol except for very few minor misspellings it's perfect.. maybe you can make a sequel..pretty please?with sugar coated strawberry on top? *Gives her best puppy dog eyes imitation*
FullFathomFive 12/30/08 . chapter 1
Loved the bickering. They're so cute together!
Kapris.TheCharismatic.Disaster 12/30/08 . chapter 1
yea i agree, u should keep it going,un. the first chapter was awesome!
darkonex852 12/26/08 . chapter 1
This was a very cool look at the dynamic between these two characters, you should definitely do at least one more chapter for this! Us fans would love it

cheers
Gravenimage 12/26/08 . chapter 1
Great story I always thought that these two were related because of their hair style but its a good story keep it up.
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