Pretty cool idea, sort of reminds me of Fullmetal Alchemist, how the Truth takes away body parts in exchange for knowledge. Write on KidGoku13! write on!

It's been a long time! I'm glad I saw an update for this.

Very great chapter! I always love the father and son bonding moments. I could picture Bardock's expression when Goku told him they were enemies much stronger than Frieza.

GWY!

Heh, you too, huh? Latelty, I've been calling Tien and Chiaotzu Tenshinhan and Chaozu without even thinking about it. :P

Good chappie. ^^

GWY!

SO FUNNY! FUNNY FUNNY FUNNY!
do MORE! plz? for me?
OH PLZ OH PLZ
Bardock:I miss my eye!

Goku:I miss tasting things!!

Table:I miss my tail!

Vegeta:(crying silently)
LOLLOLOLOLOLOL

Kinda reminds me of Saiyan Blood a bit when Bardock met Goku after he trained from the Otherworld...(sigh)...good times. Good times. :) Nice chapter. Love it!

GWY!

Nice story. Until they get to Mira, they're going to be miserable...Can't wait for more.

~Bye-bee~
Angel Saiyan

I knew you wouldn't be able to resist pairing Bardock with Seripa! You are weak...jk. ;p

Heh heh, so Raditz is a daddy now. I can just picture his reaction upon seeing them... XD And Kira made me think of Gundam SEED, lol. :p

GWY!

Ha! This is interesting. I look foward to the next installment.

^_^ Nice chapter! I feel sorry for Raditz and Bardock though. Oh, and also Vegeta. O_o Its gonna be weird with Vegeta voiceless though. Update soon please!

I likes it to ^^ poor Raditz
“It should take a few days for this to work...” Mira said, leaving the pot to walk out, “Look at it this way, you'll be a father in a way.”

Darn it...I'll have kids, and still not have had--

Ohh i like this story alot ^^

the concept is neat ^^

Raditz is a ho XD but i love him :3

now to the next chapter! XD

coolio! great plot idea too! I can't wait for more! I wonder what Radditz's reaction will be when he sees his dad again! :)
~choco_saiyan

Such an excellent chapter! This chapter was funny and serious in some ways. Oh well, update soon.

GWY!

-DBZROCKS10

Heh, the beginning was a bit disturbing... And I like this story serious, I don't think it would need much humor. Just a little here and there for comic relief.

GWY!

Amazing chapter.

How do you create these stories?

Oh, and about that OC, I think this story doesn't need one.

Keep on writing!