|Reviews for My Sister Rosalie, Book I: Captor|
| dearalice 8/11/09 . chapter 41
I absolutely love this new side of rosalie, I wish she would stay around longer. I love how she was so excited to make Bella that peanut butter and jelly sandwich but ended up messing up from... Excitement? I think that's why.
I think the whole sweater deal is adorable, especially how bella had to ask rosalie to wear it just so it would smell like her.
Love the story! Can't wait for the next update
| persephonesfolly 8/11/09 . chapter 7
It's interesting to see Bella portrayed as a country girl. I'm enjoying the contrast between her perspective on the Hales' sophistication vs. the simple life of small town Montana in 1934. Her musings on the nature of relationships ("maybe I was spending way too much energy thinking about how to rearrange who I am for a boy I've only just met") and the give and take inherent in the getting to know the other person stage were realistic and an honest depiction of the way teenagers are when venturing into romance for the first time.
| sk4rd 8/10/09 . chapter 2
Okay, I'm finally getting around to reviewing EVERY chapter! Sorry I took forever, home life has been very hectic. So I don't think i'll be able to review every chapter frequently.
So, starting with this chapter.
I love the time you set it in, super duper unique and it rocks. I love the discriptions of Edward,
"Mr. What-is-his-problem Platt" and especially "Mr. Dark-Glare". I hate Edward, so I love any, if slight, bashing of him.
And thats all I have for this chapter, besides the usual 'It's awesome.'
Not to sure when you should expect the next review I'm sorry.
| Rise-N Seraphim 7/31/09 . chapter 40
lol mother, that's cute... Bella is a little child... anyways, nice chapter, good portrayal of Rosalie's sorrow and Bella's... love. I love reading this story, it's so... meaningful, please update soon!
| massrie 7/31/09 . chapter 40
I think this chapter was absolutely informative. Rule Number one, or the only rule has been completely explained.
I have to say I look forward to all of your chapters. I find that they are the highlight of my day. I have to concentrate and have complete quiet around me when I read it as I want to absorb Rosalie's every intent and word.
| Review guy who forgot password 7/25/09 . chapter 39
This chapter was brilliant and i cannot wait for the next one, so hurry up and type it up! hahaha.
| DropBears 7/17/09 . chapter 39
So, i heard about this fic from storm. or more like, she forced me to read it, and im so glad she did.
I find this story pretty damn awesome.
it does get a little confusing in some places, but that might just be my reading, i tend to skip things without noticing.
I dont have any real beef at all with this fic. i was never fond of Rosalie, but i think, in this fic, shes starting to grow on me, like rosailie the fungus... very pretty, deadly fungus. hahah. i hope this fic continues being amazing, i look forward to reading more :D
| Master of the Boot 7/10/09 . chapter 31
Alright, what the hell did Rose do during those seven seconds? Some kind of wierd lesbian thing? Something so foul and disgusting that I can't even think about it?
Okay, no mincing words, I just hate Rosalie even more. I liked the Hyde and Jekyl comparison, but from reading this, I have a hard time believing that there even is a Jekyl.
I hate her. I hate her!
Oh, God! I HATE HER SO MUCH! I wanted to shout for joy when Bella said this. Honestly, the love that Bella has for Rose is so sick and disgusting. There's nothing beautiful or lovely about it. It's like beating a puppy with a baseball bat and then forcing it to love you becuase it's your bitch and you're its master.
I liked the comparison to Carmilla. But Rose is no Queen. She's nothing a filthy whore and the best she can hope for is to suck some powerful vampire's cock and take a little slice of what he has. All that she's good for is having Aro masturbate all over her.
Rose is just raping Bella over and over agian. Burn those retarded books and burn down the whole cabin. I just want Bella to see Rose for who she is, not how she smells or how she's occasionally nice. She's like a beaten wife in an abuseive realtionship and I've never wanted Rose to die so badly.
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| Master of the Boot 7/10/09 . chapter 30
So Bella wants Rose to drain her?
God, more and more, Bella's love for Rose is turning into something sick and horrible. This isn't love, it's brainwashing with a dash of stockholm syndrome.
And Bella asks for Rose to tell her when she's going to kill her? God, this realationship gets more sickening every passing chapter.
That being said, there is nothing wrong with the way that you depict the characters. It's just that all my hate for Jake vanishes when I read about Rosalie.
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| Master of the Boot 7/9/09 . chapter 39
This will be my final review tonight. I'm aware that I skipped quite a few chapters, but I don't think that really matters much.
Okay, this chapter more than ever before cemented to me the idea that Bella's feelings for Rosalie are a mistake, that she'd be better off being Jacob black's wife for eternity than spend one more second in the company of this ghastly, invasive and controlling woman. Honeslty, I've never seen a less ideal relationship where one side didn't beat the other to a pulp.
I believe that Rose is just sucking the life out of Bella and one day Bella is going to look back on this and regret everything. Rose is just going to leave Bella a broken shell with a pretty dress on.
When I swear at Rosalie and use all manner of foul curse words, I mean ever word of it. I'm not saying anything about her that I don't truly mean.
Goodnight and ta
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| Master of the Boot 7/9/09 . chapter 29
I enjoyed parts of this chapter and it had nothing to do with Rosalie.
Bella steals the show for me, she's the entire reason that I keep on coming back for more.
I thought it was cool, bringing up that kissing game. It really gives Bella a sense of history.
If I can give advice to Bella it would be this, "Dump Rose the first chance you get and jump on the Edward wagon." Don't be gentle with dumping her either. With this Bella/Rose thing, all I can feel is pity for Bella.
Bella is right, she is a sucker for Rose.
The holy bible, If I got the bible as I gift, I'd do my best to pretend to like it. Seriously, that's virtually the worst book a person can get. As you can tell, I didn't take very much from the bible.
Anyways, Bella lost. Somehow, that's hardly a surprise, but I was rather hoping that she might win somehow. I feel sad at her loss. And Rose is too busy celebrating to noice. Instert derogatory terms here.
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| Master of the Boot 7/9/09 . chapter 28
I don't buy that bullshit about vampires sucking out souls. That's what the vampires in Hellsing do, not the ones in Twilight.
What Rose supposedly did her with Bella's soul is tantamount to rape. Taking somebody's soul like that is worse than murder.
I liked Bella's search for bitemarks and her bad need for an underarm deodorant. That was very funny. I also laughed how Bella has the vampire venom all wrong.
And immedately afterwards, Bella learns the joys of masturbation. Isn't life a party.
swoontastic. That word deserves a place in the dictionary. I love that.
I'm having a seriously love-hate relationship with this story.
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| Master of the Boot 7/9/09 . chapter 27
Bella is starting to lose it. A few more weeks of this hell and she'll be totally off her gourd.
I won't even talk about Rosalie in this one.
I have to say that Bella's loss of sanity was rather amuzing but worrying at the same time. It was funny and fascinating how you brough up the thing abous essays.
I haven't actually read Jane Austen but I'm afraid that it'll be idiotic. Is Jane Austen any good or is she totally overrated?
THis chapter really made me pity Bella, she thinks that she's in love with this harpy. Rose is eating her with her eyes. Again, I'd have stabbed my self to death with a fork had I been in Bella's position.
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| Master of the Boot 7/9/09 . chapter 26
I find it disturbing how much alcohol Bella is consuming. I guess it fits in with what Rose's mother taught her. It makes it easier to fall in love (supposedly)
Is Rose lovable: hell no! Unless you're Bella.
I do love though how Bella is still thinking about staying in shape and escaping. That's the good, feisty Bella that we know and love.
Yeah, 'blah' is a medical term. THis line just made my day. In fact, Bella in this chapter made up for the bad experiences in the othe story.
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| Master of the Boot 7/9/09 . chapter 25
Honest to God, I pity Bella for falling in love with Rose. At least, that was my mindset when I walked into this chapter.
There were some truly heartfelt moments in this chapter involving Bella. I like how Rose has virtually stopped talking and expressing herself. I'm almost afraid to check out the companion piece, but I'll do it anyways.
When I first read that summary from Rose By a Lemon Tree, I read that line where Bella begs to be killed rather than left alone. I got the idea in my head that Rose had kidnapped Bella and was torturing her like a character in a Tarantino movie. Shows what I know.
I started cheering for Bella when she got so happy at the sight of the canned goods and her shouting at the wierd thing in the woods. Go Bella!
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