If this isn't your best work, I'd hate to see your best. God! This is seriously the hottest story I've read...EVER!

I like it. There arn't enough stories about phone-sex. This one was realy hot. Thank you for writing!

PS: I hope everything works out ok for you and who-ever, ya' know?

Aww, very cute! =]

oh man. this is great. i mean, i have a thing for phone sex anyway, but this is great. my only problem with it was that i felt like for a story that was rated m, there wasn't a lot of description of the sex itself. there was a lot of buildup - which was really well done, incidentally, with the awkwardness and then just giving in - so i felt like the climax should have been stronger. i mean, i suck at writing lemons, so i am not really one to talk. i don't understand how people do it. but if you are in the same boat as me, i guess you could just read other lemons and kind of try to emulate them until you get good at just doing one of your own. so it could just be because i am horny and wanted some sex in there, or it could be my pretentious desire for you to really perfect this, but either way i feel like this is a great story that is worth thinking more about. good job!

AH! PHONE SEX! :P yay! ^^

Hot. Cute. Amazing. LOVED it.

Finally! Something different! I've been reading lots of Style stuff on FF latley and it was all starting to mesh together. But this was a really nice change! I loved it!

God DAMN.
Okay, first of all. This was a very unique spin on the way people write smut. You could have gone and written something very straight-forward, but went with something totally different instead. And I enjoyed that something very much. I mean, phone sex? That's clever. And really REALLY hot. This whole fic was freaking hot. The dialogue between the two of them was fantastic, too!

"...Can we try this when I get back?”
Possibly some continuation? :>
In any case, please write more! You're extremely talented!

I never really understood how phone sex worked, but now I get it :) This was actually really well written, even though you keep saying it's not. Very descriptive, and I loved how innocent Kyle was. Write more!